Comic idea 1 (Patreon)

Remember I was talking about doing a physical comic with the help of a kickstarter and that I have tons of stories ive written along the years so I've been thinking long and hard about it and I think I should start with a story I did back in the day when I decided to make a timeline-style story.

The people closest to me that have been around me for the longest probably remember that my bear stories are based on another story I wrote when I was a teen (a horny one that wanted to do fanfics of his own characters hahaha) and that most of my stories have continuity in a way where the events happen in the same universe but at different stages of time.
The very first one so far in the time line is the one I want to do as a comic and I want to run it to you and see what you think.

The first one has the tentative title of 'the forgers' and it's about the incident where the land of the bears is struck by the 'reflections' (the bad guys from old dog lol), a paracitic shapeless entity that only predates planets that are on the brink of destruction. They feed on the river of souls but only when a massive flow of souls go back to it, so it takes a few souls and it goes unnoticed. In order to do so the reflections take shape of the dominant species of the planet that is about to collapse and infiltrates and makes sure the planet goes its curse and perishes.
The inhabitants of the land of the bears find out about them and try to fight them but they notice their weapons don't have any effect on them.
3 weaponsmiths miraculously create a weapon each with their utter devotion to it, without knowing it they fused their own soul to their weapons and discover that their weapons are capable of harming the reflections, so they get together and wage a war against the invaders while an unexpected situation brews under their nose.

It's not a huge story and it's self conclusive In Theory cuz things happen after that but it's a story for other characters like the concept of jojo's lol. So I think it's a great story to start this kind of project. It doesn't have a lot of sex and it's not the land of the bears from the xxx comics so it has everything not just hot beefy men.
I want to know if this is something you'd support and if so I could give you more details. If you feel it to be a bit lukewarm I could pitch something else.
Your opinion is massively appreciated💖