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This right here is likely the most amount of blood you'll ever see me draw in the entire comic. I don't generally like drawing violence (especially if women are involved) but I thought her hand had to look at least moderately hurt or this whole page would be unlikely to land as intended. 

I put a lot of consideration into how someone like Liz would handle a heavy dose of unexpected bad news. In the end, I settled on the old staple of "bottles up emotions only to erupt over something trivial." She was going to break something, that much I knew from the start. Her dad is a hulk-monster after all. I thought it fitting to see some of that in Liz when she's genuinely distressed. 

But what do you think of the page? Is this a bit too serious for TRW? I try to avoid inflicting tonal whiplash if I can, and I'm counting on you guys to stop me if I start to drift in that direction. I hope you look forward to some Liz/Bria bonding in any case! 


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Lord Washington

I hate how we’re told to not bottle up our emotions, but we often don’t have a choice.

Sophia Dearden

This is a good page. I think it's still well within the bounds of the typical mood for this series, just with a little more seriousness. If anything I'd say the pages before with Switch felt more intense and dire. But that might just be me.

alex baker

who are they going to talk to i feel like i missed some dialogue?

Squid Hills

Only complaint I have about the blood is how brown it looks. It doesn't look much like blood. Apart from that, I don't think the tone is too serious or anything; I mean Liz's nonchalant reaction after mangling her fist is kinda funny, as is Bria's response. Besides, you need to get used to drawing blood, considering Switch is gonna gonna get all Clive Barker on Vincent...

Anonymous

Perfectly reasonable amount of blood. I liked when Switch had more serious topics, and I think you’re a good enough writer to balance the serious with the goofy/sexy stuff

Anonymous

She certainly has her father's punch. Hope Bria can make her feel better.

HungryOuroboros

God I love Liz. I would say that her hand isn't quite blood enough (as someone who has been a moron and punched shit I shouldn't have), but I really appreciate how the physical outburst contrasts with her normal mellow vibes.

Anonymous

This feels like it's still in the appropriate zone for this comic's idiom. I appreciate the way you talk so openly about the process and about the energy of the work!

Reinbach

Oh yeah judging from what I've seen in real life I agree her hand would be a lot worse if I was going for realism! :O

Reinbach

Hey thanks! I figure the only way I get better is to keep the door wide open for feedback.