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Three Square Meals - Chapter 151 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-01 02:03:11
Edited:
2022-06-04 14:29:33
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Hey everyone,

I've upload the final scenes for this chapter, so it is now complete.

I hope you enjoy it,

Tefler

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Anonymous

Finally, they are starting to be the cat. Nice ending to the chapter

bjcreek

Really good 151. Thanks. Looking forward to the big battle...coming soon??? Thanks, again.

AzureReader

I believe the story says about a day for Gahl’s forces to get to the border and then three days six hours to get to Maliri home worlds… assuming they take a direct route and don’t get delayed much by the plan John and crew have for them. So at a minimum it will be 4.25 days. It varies but at the current pace it might take 2 chapters to get through a TSM day. Plus or minus. That puts us at about 8 chapters before any final confrontation. I actually hope Tef takes at least 8 chapters. Everything in this saga has been building to this so it should be savored. After Gahl’s defeat a few more progenitor face offs could be fun as everyone (including readers) enjoy the payoff of John and team becoming more powerful and proficient. But probably nothing will be as dramatic as Gahl’.

Bp Hlpt

Ch 151 typos These are all I am aware of in the complete chapter. Some of these were found by others. -- There are over 50 instances where you have extra spaces at the end of a paragraph. Right now would be a great time for you to remove those and prove to yourself that doing so does not impact your formatting in any way. -- There are 4 extra blank lines at the end of the document. follow in her mother’s footsteps. Joy turned to sadness -- Delete extra space before ‘Joy’ follow in her mother’s footsteps. Joy turned to sadness The officers darted shocked glances at one another, -- Delete extra space before ‘darted’ The officers darted shocked glances at one another, Cartwright gave her a penetrating stare, -- Delete extra space before ‘gave’ Cartwright gave her a penetrating stare, as many thrall warships as possible. They could be invading -- Delete extra space before ‘They’ as many thrall warships as possible. They could be invading Dana’s pout faded as she listened, -- Delete extra space before ‘Dana’ Dana’s pout faded as she listened, then coasted over to a a grassy verge -- a a > a then coasted over to a grassy verge Hover-cars had crashed into each other -- Hover-cars > Hovercars - as we agreed in ch 150 Hovercars had crashed into each other “What are they?” Jehanna asked, -- are they > is that - since Jehanna didn't know what Shimenawa was/were, how did she know it/they was/were plural? “What is that?” Jehanna asked, Jehanna asked, glancing curiously at her friend. -- asked > said --or-- asked, glancing > said as she glanced Jehanna said, glancing curiously at her friend. --or-- Jehanna said as she glanced curiously at her friend. “Quarter-past two,” she replied, -- Quarter-past > Quarter past “Quarter past two,” she replied, The covers has slipped down while they rested, -- has > had The covers had slipped down while they rested, “We would never do this, but it’s possible to keep draining -- italicize both ‘We’ and ‘never’ to emphasize both words “We would never do this, but it’s possible to keep draining He must have killed hundreds-of-thousands of women -- hundreds-of-thousands > hundreds of thousands He must have killed hundreds of thousands of women as she digested his grim tale of revenge. -- This is not clear; whose tale, whose revenge, and against whom? Did you mean... as she digested John's grim tale of revenge against her father for all the women he had killed. -- ???? The green skinned Empress gave them a grateful smile. -- green skinned > green-skinned The green-skinned Empress gave them a grateful smile. but unfortunately I don’t have much choice. -- but unfortunately > but, unfortunately, but, unfortunately, I don’t have much choice. something else I need to be honest with your about. -- your > you something else I need to be honest with you about. both as eager as each other. -- both as eager as each > each of them as eager as the each of them as eager as the other. this was the closest we could get to you experience what it must be like -- to you > so that you could this was the closest we could get so that you could experience what it must be like just her pretty face, golden blonde hair, and sparkling blue eyes -- golden blonde > golden-blonde && sparkling blue > sparkling-blue just her pretty face, golden-blonde hair, and sparkling-blue eyes The mention of her brother’s ex-girlfriend sharply reminded her of his loss. -- This isn't as clear as it could be. By ‘his loss’ do you mean ‘her brother's loss’ or ‘the loss/death of her brother’? I would assume the latter? So... The mention of her brother’s ex-girlfriend sharply reminded her of the loss of her brother. --or-- The mention of her brother’s ex-girlfriend sharply reminded her that her brother was gone. [or dead, or whatever] as John and Alyssa soaped her down [...] to soap down and massage her nubile body. -- no need to soap down twice as John and Alyssa soaped her down [...] to massage then rinse her nubile body. said haltingly, *A-aneth maeheim... ish-grel-athair.” -- *A-aneth > “A-aneth said haltingly, “A-aneth maeheim... ish-grel-athair.” who was happy to watch proceedings from the periphery -- proceedings > the proceedings who was happy to watch the proceedings from the periphery 80% of his fleet assets have been confirmed to be destroyed. -- have been confirmed to be > are confirmed to have been 80% of his fleet assets are confirmed to have been destroyed. I’ve spoke to Commodore Flores, -- spoke > spoken I’ve spoken to Commodore Flores, as realisation sunk in that there was nothing they could do -- sunk > sank as realisation sank in that there was nothing they could do noticed the flicker of moment as the airlock door opened -- moment > movement noticed the flicker of movement as the airlock door opened at Auralei’s radically different look. [..] enthralled by Auralei’s spectacular new look. -- I suggest changing the 1st ‘look’ to ‘appearance’ --or-- Auralei’s radically different look. > Auralei. at Auralei’s radically different appearance. [..] enthralled by Auralei’s spectacular new look. --or-- at Auralei. [..] enthralled by Auralei’s spectacular new look. without a Progenitor for ten-thousand years, -- ten-thousand > ten thousand without a Progenitor for ten thousand years, The Galkirans fleets will probably reach Maliri territory -- Galkirans > Galkiran’s --or-- Galkirans > Galkiran The Galkiran’s fleets will probably reach Maliri territory --or-- The Galkiran fleets will probably reach Maliri territory hopefully... in four hours time. -- hours > hours’ --or-- four hours time. > about four hours. hopefully... in four hours’ time. --or-- hopefully... in about four hours. constructed a Hyper-Warp Gate in the vicinity -- Hyper-Warp > Hyper-warp - We agreed on Hyper-warp and Hyper-warp Gate in Ch 150??? constructed a Hyper-warp Gate in the vicinity estimated the thrall hyper-warp speed. -- hyper-warp > Hyper-warp estimated the thrall Hyper-warp speed. to slow down or immobilise as many thrall warships -- immobilise > immobilize to slow down or immobilize as many thrall warships fastest ships through our Hyper-Warp Gate first, -- Hyper-Warp > Hyper-warp fastest ships through our Hyper-warp Gate first, narrow jump window at the Hyper-Warp Gate. -- Hyper-Warp > Hyper-warp narrow jump window at the Hyper-warp Gate. So the fastest ships get their quickly, -- their > there So the fastest ships get there quickly, bring them straight back to the gate... -- gate > Gate bring them straight back to the Gate... through the gate directly into the Kythshara system. -- gate > Gate through the Gate directly into the Kythshara system. any risk of the gate being destroyed. -- gate > Gate any risk of the Gate being destroyed. exterminated along with our Hyper-Warp Gate, -- Hyper-Warp > Hyper-warp exterminated along with our Hyper-warp Gate, Rahn’hagon took it as a personal insult that Larn’kelnar engaged -- Larn’kelnar > Mael’nerak Rahn’hagon took it as a personal insult that Mael’nerak engaged cloaked mines and gravity well generators, -- gravity well > gravity-well cloaked mines and gravity-well generators, can’t run their shields 24/7 in hyper-warp or they’ll burn out -- hyper-warp > Hyper-warp can’t run their shields 24/7 in Hyper-warp or they’ll burn out knocking them out of hyper-warp, -- hyper-warp > Hyper-warp knocking them out of Hyper-warp, after they drop out of hyper-warp before the crews react -- hyper-warp > Hyper-warp after they drop out of Hyper-warp before the crews react

TF4EVA
>>85226422

no no no no no! As wonderful as AzureReadr is Dear Grand Overlord Tefler, don't listen to them. Given all the unrest in the world you need to strip back the story and resist the need for fluff - cut to the chase. For instance give up the gratuitous sex, pages of poor me metrosexual male BS, convoluted plot and character development/ redevelopmnet and concentrate on getting us to the fight on time. As much as I'm loving the story so far i need to see Calara directing fleet batles, Sakura or Luna beating down Valera, illirith and Faye running amok in the progenitor cyber world..... and gahl broken and his thralls absorbed by rahn or John all before christmas 2022. A cuddle and blow job here and a talking to and orgy there is okay and keep the banter, the XO meeting, the loading up, the....

AzureReader
>>85226422

I agree with ditching the fluff. Time to really let the writer out and have some fun with this. That means we don’t need the 20th Tom Walker scene that tells us he’s still screwed and they have made zero progress figuring anything out. If you cut away from a battle scene to one of those I’m going to find Tom Walker and shoot him myself.

Michael56Smith
>>85226422

.108: No no no no no no! You are not supposed to be telling the creative Author of a wonderful story how to do his job, ... Did he ask for fan input on his writings? nope! Are your comments helpful? or are you just blowing off a little steam? yep, the 2nd one. But if you should ever have the opportunity to put a couple of rounds into either Mason Newmont (or his current alias) or Tom Walker, please take the shot, thank you, ... ;-) TTFN

Michael56Smith
>>85230048

.109: Hey there, hardworking Tef Fan, I might have missed it on your list of typos, but I KNOW I saw a wrong word, 'their' when it should have been 'there', ... I tried to find it again, but no luck so far, ... had you seen it and I missed it's posting in your notes? Anyway, have a good evening. ;-) TTFN

Bp Hlpt
>>85230048

Yep, directly above your comment. Count up 10 corrections from the bottom.

AzureReader
>>85226422

I think fans can comment on what they would like to see more of, and less of. But you are right, I was mostly just planning a murder. I think I’d get off on a temporary insanity plea though.

Evan

I mentioned this one before, but it wasn’t addressed when you did the last update, Tefler. So the fastest ships get their quickly… the word their should be there, since it’s a location not a possessive.

Bp Hlpt
>>85320863

Hey Evan, Thanks for finding that. You were the first one to post it back a couple of days ago. I can always count on you to be one of the first ones to report typos for any chapter Tefler posts. I added it to my compendium above for Tefler's convenience. It's about 10 corrections from the bottom. AFAIK, the update for 151 that Tefler posted only corrected the Larn’kelnar reference that should have been Mael’nerak, nothing else.

Anonymous

Question that may have been asked: Didn’t John and Co disable or destroy most of the defenses for K?? So how are they planning on using it in the future chapters?

Michael56Smith
>>85357646

.118: I thought that they only partially took apart one defense tower, ... plenty of others, and the one that they did remove weapons off of still had more, ... I think, I'd need to ask Sparks, ... So, a weakness at that point, if you knew it, ... ;-) TTFN

Anonymous

Did we ever find out what Johanna plan was? Don’t remember it being discussed.

Anonymous
>>85357646

I remember reading that part. But didn’t John and someone destroy the AI and the power core for the entire defense grid? Otherwise, how did the Invictus make it to the planet after the Raptor was litterly shot to pieces??

Bp Hlpt
>>85357646

I agree with your understanding, David. While they only "requisitioned" weapons from 1-3 [not sure really how many] defense tower, the AI and power core were shut down when Dana used her black hole in the pyramid to stop the AI from causing the pyramid's power core from destroying the pyramid. The power core did blow up, but the black hole sucked up all of the explosive force, saving the day. It has not been stated whether or not it still exists in any form, whether it can be restarted (or rebuilt and how fast), what they have to do to prevent it from trying to kill them again, whether or not they can get the "mists" working again, or what all they might be able to find on Kythshara that might help them. Many unanswered questions.

Jedi Khan
>>85375807

It's probably "The Jehenna News Hour" or something like that, featuring Bean'thalas, the new ruler of the Maliri.

Jedi Khan
>>85357646

The AI controlling the defense grid has certainly been terminated, and at least one of the satellites has been requisitioned for parts, but the vast majority of the satellites are still there. There's no central control for them anymore, as far as we know, so how John and the girls plan to put them to use is still unknown. Bp, the pyramid has literally been gutted by Dana's blackhole in order to keep the explosion from killing everyone and possibly destroying the planet as well. The pyramid was effectively the power core. Rebuilding it will likely be the work of months, not the few days they have until GK's forces arrive.

Michael56Smith
>>85375807

.124: The piece(s) were going to feature the current sexy and young Matriarchs, highlighting how sweet and lovely they are now, to lure the Maliri males back,... ;-) TTFN

Anonymous

151 is the last chapter complete currently, correct?

AzureReader
>>85357646

The pyramid was the power core for the psychic defense that drove thralls insane. It was not the power source for defense platforms in space. Those had their own power cores. Whatever controlled the defense grid was taken off line because the defense grid stopped working. But that doesn’t mean it was destroyed. Most likely the AI’s servers were just powered down. There is no reason to put servers within meters of a fusion reactor in the zone Dana destroyed. I manage a bunch of servers and it never occurred to me to call a nuclear power plant to have them moved as close to the reactor core as possible. I’m sure they will be able to power up those servers immediately with a small power core. Even in this make believe world servers don’t need anywhere near as much power as psychic effect the size of a galactic nebula.

Bp Hlpt
>>85420360

Correct. As of now, Ch 151 is the last complete, or partial, chapter AFAIK.

Anonymous
>>85357646

We shouldn't rule out the possibility, that the AI simply decided to stop fighting back. Recall, that the robot-thralls didn't shut down immediately but only after a while. The AI may have considered John and his thralls a massive mismatch to what had been expected from a progenitor and unilaterally ceased the hostilities without engaging in communication. Or temporarily pulled back to reassess the situation...

Anonymous

nice lead up to next battle good job

Michael carney

Am I losing my mind or did Tefler have a post after this about charging for the next chapter in advance. And had a few comments in reply.

Evan
>>85771057

Michael, you asked a logical OR question, which can be split into two questions. Are you losing your mind? I wouldn’t know. Mine was lost quite a few decades back. Please let me know if it’s ever found. :-). As for whether or not Tefler had a post about charging for the next chapter in advance, yes, that was done, too, and there were some comments in response. That’s the Chapter 152 post.

Michael carney
>>85771057

That's my problem. I don't have a Chapter 152 post. Last post Chapter 151, June 1, 12:03.

Bp Hlpt
>>85771057

Here's a link to the 152 post - https://www.patreon.com/posts/three-square-ch-67165816

Michael carney
>>85771057

After refreshing multiple times and nothing, suddenly it has appeared. Thank you for your support. Now can you get a job with my telco and fix my problem with them.

Rayce Royal

Yeah, I really can't stand Allysa. She's such a conniving little bitch and uses John constantly

Anonymous
>>93806544

Yea I have to agree, I'm starting to get a little fed up with Alyssa's constant undermining of John and withholding information. Granted she's stopped doing it in combat mostly and when she was doing it in a fight it was bc she and the girls typically had things under control pretty quick and she wanted to preserve John's focus on whatever he was doing. But the whole scene when they arrived on Larathyra just rubbed me the wrong way. She knew the mission objective and that the civilians likely needed help, but she immediately strong-armed John into recruiting one of the Larathyran women by cashing in her favor at the most inopportune time. Granted, John ended up picking the very girl who was essentially in charge of the survivors and they managed to get the ball rolling quickly on relief efforts, but Alyssa still deliberately took advantage of John and the situation. What makes it worse is that she had apparently been planning to do it for quite some time, at least a month or perhaps even from the point she got John to agree to that bet (I forget exactly when they made the bet in relation to learning about Kythshara). But then she goes and deliberately doesn't tell John about Auralei's relation to Larn'kelnar until after the fact. Then she has the nerve to tell John he still owes her the favor bc he violated the terms of their agreement and "complained." Wtf happened to her promising she wouldn't withhold information? Far as I'm concerned, the whole thing is null and void.