October sketch, feedback wanted! (CC Code Geass) (Patreon)

Going to do something a little different from now on. I'm going to have less time to spend drawing so I want that time to matter- and I value your opinions a lot so I will be asking $5+ patrons for feedback on some of my artwork!

So here's the sketch that is going to be posted October 1st, the blue is the base, the red is a bonus edit with some clothes pulled down- the green is the unpulled variation. There is also an underwear edit but it's pretty minor.