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Heres the next one! Woo! WRITING !


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zdUtbRfv07W6vsluZl_jXwNtVo-flAreL4s_DOWsTOo/edit?usp=sharing

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Anonymous

Holy shit 2 chapters in one day

Joel Bullock

I really want to see a full Dungeon dive now with all the cool shit in Delta

Anonymous

I really want to see Delta feed Perhal to Wyin. Really really.

Anonymous

The main door to the third floor needs an upgrade to lock itself if someone breaks a certain amount of Jellagon's rules. Can't have someone stealing all of Delta's stuff and not fight the boss. Of course, if they start returning the stolen goods, the lock weakens.

Anonymous

No, Perhal will be dealt with by King Jellagon, most likely in its Ultimate Form (well what it's ultimate from is is at the moment, further improvements maybe forth coming in the future).

Anonymous

Hopefully in the future Delta will be able to add an additional Room back to the missing Cardinal Points that had the Rooms/Corridors removed due to lack of Space available.

Anonymous

When will Waddles the Overload give Mharia the business? I need a sassy duck in my life.

Carl Mason

Why do I feel like the "forgive this one for her actions, for her knowledge is that of the unborn" hat is a dunce cap?

Anonymous

Aww, her boss sounds like the most adorable abomination you could ever imagine. I can’t wait to read when the king knights and dungeon management start trying to impose their order on her turf, it will be brilliant! ps Nu add plenty of do not touch/steal/ or break signs around the place to encourage idiots to make the their boss more difficult. Also have a sign in front of boss room with “Greed and glutting beware of attack wyrm” and have picture of worm besides it, that will confuse them. 😀😀😀

Gavriel

The "monster king reincarnated" slime is going to be great

Gavriel

Mharia is a child, throws quee at her, shyshyshy 😉

Anonymous

Love these! Maybe there SHOULD be a dozen handsome spider boys? 😹😹 Thanks for the chapter!

Mickey Phoenix

I kind of want a magical reflecting pool or something right at the start of the floor, where they can pay a copper to get a sneak preview of the final boss. They pay, and they see this tiny little harmless worm, and they laugh at the sign that says, "Tread lightly in yon castle, and take not o'ermuch from its bounties, lest ye face the wrath of the great worm!"

Mickey Phoenix

You can never have too many handsome spider boys with delightfully gender-ambiguous names!

Mickey Phoenix

Perhal is terrifying. And vile. It's *so nice* to see that there's someone on our side who can toss her around like a little doll!