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THE SPELLBOOK : REBOOT - Page 266-270 [THE END?] (Patreon)

Published:
2022-12-23 19:08:29
Imported:
2022-12

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Thank you for reading, hope you enjoyed it!


Next update: Monday(?)

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BrianDVD

I enjoyed it but the ending got weird. I hope there is something else to wrap things up

shadooown

Hmm.... the ending feels a bit too sudden. We enjoyed the story for 3 month (or even longer) and a lot of things were prepared letting the audience guessing what will happen next. Who is the one who owns the book? Who says the truth? What does the mother hide from Layla? What happened to the guy in the stomach? What will be the consequences? Will the be an awesome plot-twist? Suddenly, with just 10 pages out of 270 in total, so less than 4% of the story, Layla reveals that everyone is dead and she needs to kill the last surviver aswell. So she crushed him in her hands, delete the memory of the mother, finish. Personally, this story was amazing. Like all the other stories you publish. You are one of the best writers of this planet. When you add just a bit more extras in the end, like more creative deaths, more torture, more spicyness, then it will be even more amazing. :-) Have a nice Christmas, stay healthy and all the best for you!

mastershrinker
>>98147174

Thanks for the feedback! To answer some of the questions: -The mom doesn't know anything/ have any connection with the book, she's as clueless as the others - As Layla said, both are dead. After their death, she just stopped caring and decided to end it all by getting rid of all of them since there's no turning back anyway. Also, there are still some pages left that will be posted on Monday (hence the question mark), it might answer some of your questions so stay tuned! Honestly, I still have some ideas in mind but I feel the story has been dragging too long so I decided to axe some of the substories (ex: what Lalya did in the park with her friend). With that being said, I might expand this later in the future as a standalone comic.

Andre Johnson
>>98147174

I'd love this as a stand alone, even more in shoe action whilst he was stuck in there :)

Shiftlock

Pretty nice story i really liked these reboot 🤩👍. Hope the story continues feel theres is lots of things to see and clear :). These story is one the best you have done so far. I have been following for quite while now and your stories never sease to amaze me in every aspect. Im adjusted to your plot twist but i really spect this one is really mind blowing🤯 in every sense not just who is the real owner of the book. (Also is personal that if you plan to continue with the great plot twists and giving us those great surprises i love to try to guess what will happen next is really funny)

Marinka
>>98147174

Its very easy to have a concept drag on unexpectedly to the point where it become far bigger and/bloated than expected and your left with how to I trim. Its even harder to avoid if your building the story as you release parts. Great work as always.