Rejected#2 Critique (Patreon)

Ugh... everything was going wrong with this one.  Faces are way off and just struggling and struggling to get it to look right.

A big problem is trying to have her breasts reach his mouth while still reaching his ****.  Either his **** needs to be two feet long or her breasts need to stretch two feet!  This may be physically impossible but we'll see what I can do.

After working on this for four days (this is the third version) its turning into less of a challenge and more of an albatross.  I'll come back to this and try a forth time.