Rejected! Self Critique (Patreon)

I'll just post these two Valentines drawings that I'm dumping because... well, mostly because I spent far too much time struggling with them.  Although I like how her face and body turned out, the perspective is way off and her body is contorted in a very unappealing way.  Caricature is way off.

This drawing went through about two hours of revisions and tweaking  to the point it looks totally un-natural and totally stiff.  The two of them do not even look like they are part of the same art and more of a composite of two different drawings.

Anyways, I know some of you will find some enjoyment out of this so I'll post it rather then dump it.