Storybook Level Setup... Chapter 1 Done! (Patreon)

Hey everyone!
We've been working on the illustrations and writing for the first chapter of this game!

To clear up what that means, we've decided to present every level as a little storybook, which you can select on a menu screen...
When opening it, you'll flip through the pages to read an illustrated story, then at the halfway point of each chapter you'll get to the double-page that actually lets you play the level...

Here's some super quick mockup to show what I mean:

From here we already have some completed pages, so imagine you're opening the first chapter book thingy, and the story starts out like this:

The next page would bring you to the gameplay, if you hit play the camera will zoom into the preview image and the level will start.

After you've completed the level, you'll get to read the rest of the chapter...

What do you think of this setup to tell the story?
Do you like how the completed pages look like so far?


Also one more thing we'd like your opinions on:

Capitalized nouns (like how it is right now)
or
Lowercase nouns (according to regular english grammar)

Did the capitalization throw you off while reading, or do you like how it looks / didn't notice?
Please to let us know your impressions, especially on the capitalization issue!

Until then seeya! =w=/