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The goal with this page and the next is to bridge out of my comfort zone a bit and try doing a more actiony sequence.  I don't want to delve into the match too much, it's not really important to the story, just need to set up these few characters coming in.  Elena might be a bit tough to write for right now but I have some fun things planned for her coming up.

Hi-res pages like this will only be put here on my sites, you can find the full-size file in the attachments below.

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Happytimes

This comic is now a sports comic (and I'm okay with that)! Got the suspicion based on Lianna's hand that this game has some loose rules on what it'll allow

Acorus

I think you did an excellent job conveying the feeling of movement with Elena. The whole action sequence feels good, but her stance accentuates that she's on skates and feels fast+fluid. If this you getting out of your comfort zone, I'm excited to see the rest of this sequence!

Cantaloupe

I know for a fact the girls will win. But I still gotta read because this upcoming part is going to be super cool and what happens after the game will be cool too. And I wanna see that blonde girl more

TheOtherHalf

Thank you! I'm not going to do too much with this scene, but wanted to try something different for just a bit.