Feedback: BAD END series! (Patreon)

Hi guys! I'm working hard to get 2B done, and I have to say that it's been fun working on this mini-comic! But since this is a new project that I'd like to involve everyone in, I also seek to improve them! Keep in mind that I keep variants to a minimum or that means I'll increase my workload, so just in case you guys get curious.

While I'm excited to continue working on them, I'd still love to hear what you guys think so far, and if there's anything I could do to improve it! I'd love to hear your suggestions!