The Island - Comic Script (Patreon)

Hey everybody! I thought you might find this interesting now that 'The Island' is done. This is what the script looks like for a comic, in case you were curious - obviously sometimes I fuse pages or change things if it doesn't work out the way I imagined it, but you can see how writing a comic can be complicated since you have to envision each panel as you go!

Page 1

Panel 1

Wide angle, DAVID, a brown horse, is laying down on the beach. High angle, looking down at him slightly sideways.

Panel 2

Close up, he looks slightly peaceful, eyes closed.

Panel 3

Close up of his eyes, they open.

Panel 4

He sits up forcefully, looking away from us.

David: *gasp*

Panel 5

Shoulder close up of him looking wildly past us, wind blowing in his mane.

Panel 6

Wide angle, huge landscape helicopter view of the strange island. Written in the water in white foam is ’The Island’

David: Where am I?

Page 2

Panel 1

David’s rising to his hooves, distant shot.

Panel 2

Medium close, showing that he’s naked. David is looking down at himself, unnerved, reflexively partially covering himself with one hand.

David: The hell?

Panel 3

Cowboy medium, David calling out with both hands around his mouth.

David: Hello?!

Panel 4

Logan: Hey!

David is turning around to look behind him, in our direction, surprised at the voice.

Panel 5

We see what he sees - a black stallion with grey spots walking towards us, also naked - David’s shoulder and surprised face are in the ultra foreground.

Panel 6

Close up of David’s face - he’s angry.

David: you!

Panel 7

The two of them in the panel, David aggressively looking up at him and pointing, Logan looking irritated.

David: Logan! I suppose this is some kind of joke you’re pulling!

Logan: Trust me David, I never wanted to see you again.

Page 3 (6 panels)

Panel 1

Medium close of Logan, averting his eyes up and away.

Logan: Especially not… this much of you.

Panel 2

Close up of David.

David: Fuck you! What is this anyway?

Wider angle, both of them, Logan throwing his arms out to the side. David’s eyes are wide, stunned, losing his anger.

Logan: Do I Look like I know? I woke up here buck-ass naked just like you!

David: So, you didn’t plan this?

Logan: Honestly, does this look like something I’d do?

Panel 3

Close up of Logan, sneering.

Logan: You think it’s been my lifelong dream to see your little pecker?

Panel 4

Close up of David’s eyes, looking down and away.

David: Okay, shut up.

Panel 5

Wide angle, both of them facing out into the ocean.

David: Where the hell are we?

Logan: Beats me. No mainland or other islands in sight.

Panel 6

Side view, Logan has turned back to the center of the island, considering. David is looking at him, ultra foreground, back to us, chest still facing the ocean.

Logan: Something’s funny here, too.

David: What do you mean?

Page 4

Panel 1

Low angle, focusing on the island but the shot is framed by both of their butts.

Logan: This island. It seems a little too… perfect.

Panel 2

Head level of the two of them.

David: I see what you mean. That tree exactly in the middle…

Panel 3

Closer shot of the tree - there’s something next to it.

David: Wait - what’s that?

Panel 4

Close up, there’s four apples on the altar and two water bottles.

Logan: You’ve gotta be fucking kidding me.

Panel 5

From slightly behind them, David pointing at the tree - there’s something written on it.

David: Look! There!

Panel 6

Close up, it’s a message scratched in the bark.

The Key lies within

and within

Page 5

Panel 1

looking back at the two of them - David is closer to the tree, both of them looking at it, just over our shoulder.

Logan: The hell does that mean?

David: No clue.

Panel 2

Medium close, slightly lower angle of David, looking back towards the ocean.

David: But I’m starting to get an idea of where we are.

Panel 3

Wider angle, David jogging to the beach, Logan, surprised, turning after him.

Logan: What? Hey, wait up!

Panel 4

David is striding into the water. Logan is jogging after him in the background.

Logan: Where are you going! You can’t swim, moron, there’s nowhere to go!

Panel 5

Medium shot of David, water up to his middle thighs, reaching out with his right hand.

David: Just shut up, asshole!

Panel 6

Over his shoulder, his hand has pressed against something.

sfx: thunk.

David: There.

Page 6

Panel 1

Medium of Logan, calling to David from the beach.

Logan: Hey! David! What’re you doing?

Panel 2

David has turned towards Logan and is pounding his fist on the invisible wall.

David: Dude, you blind?

sfx: dnk dnk dnk dnk

Panel 3

Close up of Logan.

Logan: Woah.

Panel 4

Looking over Logan’s shoulder as David exits the water.

David: So tell me: where do you think we are?

Panel 5

High angle of the two of them, looking around suspiciously.

Logan: a… a prison.

Page 7

Panel 1

Time has passed - it’s evening. They’re sitting on the beach together, facing one another, the apples and water bottles next to them.

Wide angle.

Logan: How did you get here? Do you remember?

David: No.

Logan: All I remember is…. having some supper last night.

David: Same, actually.

Panel 2

David: You didn’t have some honey with you that would’ve noticed you being kidnapped?

Panel 3

Logan medium close

Logan: No, I’m single.

Panel 4

Medium close of David

David: Good.

Panel 5

Medium of Logan, looking up fiercely.

Logan: The fuck do you mean, ‘good?’

Panel 6

Medium wide of the two of them.

David: You fucking scared Sharon off trying to steal her from me, so yeah, good!

Logan: That was High School!

David: First and only girlfriend I’ve ever had, asshole!

Logan: (muttering) 5 year old.

Page 8

Panel 1

Wide angle, they’re sitting looking away from each other.

Panel 2

Lower angle, David is standing up, his groin in full view of Logan, who’s looking.

David: Well this is a great time.

Panel 3

Logan, smiling in a snotty way.

Logan: You know, it’s funny - after a while of being naked you get used to it.

Logan: I mean, your junk doesn’t make me wanna gag nearly as much as before -

Panel 4

David’s hoof is clocking Logan across the mouth.

sfx: clomp!

Wide angle, Logan is holding his mouth, David is standing in a wider, aggressive stance, finished with his kick and staring Logan down.

Panel 5

Close up of Logan holding his nose, blood between his fingers and tears in his eyes, angry.

Panel 6

Over Logan’s shoulder, David has turned and is walking away.

Page 9

Panel 1

It’s completely dark, looking down at David’s face as he sleeps on the beach.

Panel 2

A little closer to him.

sfx: beep beep

Panel 3

Even closer, his eyes have opened, frowning.

sfx: beep beep

David: what the?

Panel 4

David sits up, looking to his right.

Panel 5

Wide angle, Logan is a little ways away, laying on his back, his penis out and fully hard, sound asleep.

Panel 6

David looks down at himself and finds that he’s fully hard too.

David: Damn wet dreams…

Page 10

Panel 1

Wider view, looking up at the sky - something is floating towards them on a parachute. it has a red light on it.

sfx (by object): beep beep

Panel 2

aerial view, the object is in the foreground top right, Logan and David in the mid background, Both sitting up, only David looking at it.

David: Logan! Wake up!

Logan: Wha? What?

Panel 3

The object has landed closer to Logan - he’s just barely in the shot.

Panel 4

Medium shot, Logan has sat up, his penis sticking out awkwardly. David has walked over - his boner is jutting out too.

David: What do you think it is?

Panel 5

Side view, Logan looking at David’s dick jutting out towards his face.

Logan: Um dude, can you quit… showing off?

Panel 6

Low angle view of David, looking down at Logan dismissively.

David: Shove it - you know how it is.

Page 11

Panel 1

Close up of the object - it’s a chest and it’s popped open. Inside is a note.

sfx: pop

Panel 2

Ultra close up. The note says ‘Kiss.’

Panel 3

Low angle of the two of them both looking down at the note incredulously.

both: the fuck?

Panel 4

Wide angle of the two of them, still sporting somewhat hard cocks, staring at each other.

Panel 5

Logan gets up. David is surprised at his sudden movement - he’s turned to go to the water, cock swinging.

Logan: Well, fuck that.

Logan: I’m gonna cool off this stupid hardon.

Page 12

Panel 1

View from David’s right shoulder as Logan walks off towards the water.

David: Um, Logan?

Panel 2

Logan is waist deep in the water.

Logan: Come on, go down.

Panel 3

Close up low dramatic angle of David, up on his knees, looking out at the ocean.

David: *gasp*

Panel 4

Behind Logan, he’s looking down, not seeing the shark fin accelerating towards him.

Panel 5

David on his feet, shouting at Logan.

David: FUCK! Logan, MOVE!

Panel 6

Logan looks up wildly, seeing the shark fin.

Page 13

Panel 1

huge dramatic shot, David has grabbed Logan by his mane and yanked him back towards the shore - the shark fin has turned.

Logan: Aaagh!

Panel 2

They’ve plopped down onto the sand.

sfx: Plumf

Logan: Ow!

Panel 3

View from above them, Logan is laying down flat, partially on top of David, holding the back of his head. David is looking at the ocean, scared.

Logan: Fucking hell!

David: Shit.

Logan: What!

Panel 4

View from behind them, they’re looking out at the ocean, and it’s full of shark fins.

Panel 5

Same angle but from the other side, looking at the two of them. They’re staring out at the ocean, not seeing the glowing eyes in the darkness behind them.

Logan: What the fuck is going on?

sfx: grrrr

Page 14

Panel 1

High angle, looking over the shoulders of a monstrous beast of shadow rising up into the bottom of the frame.

Panel 2

Low dramatic angle, the two of them right next to each other, cowering in the shadow of a massive muscular beast, arms spread wide, eyes shining.

sfx: graaaaaarrr!

Panel 3

Close up of the two of them. Logan is frozen, staring up at the monster mouth agape. David is grabbing his face determinedly.

Logan: Oh god-

Panel 4

Close up of the two of their faces, David smashing his lips into Logan’s with his eyes closed, Logan’s eyes frozen open.

Page 15

Panel 1

Epic full body shot, David’s eyes are closed.

Panel 2

Same shot, David’s eyes are open and he’s squinting up at where the monster was.

Panel 3

Over their shoulders, looking at where the monster was.

David: It’s gone.

Panel 4

Shot of the ocean - it’s clear.

David: No more sharks either.

Panel 5

Close up of their groins, their dicks overlapping.

Logan: Good. Now can you please get your dick off of mine?

Page 16

Panel 1

Logan stands up and walks away. His back to us, David still kneeling.

David: Sorry.

Panel 2

Close up of Logan, staring out into the sea, wistful distress on his face.

Panel 3

Medium close up of David, touching his fingers to his lips.

Panel 4

View from Logan’s front, David has risen and is walking towards him.

Panel 5

Wide view, from behind the two of them.

Panel 6

Same angle.

David: I’m sorry I kicked your face.

Page 17

Panel 1

Side view, Logan glancing at David.

Panel 2

Same angle, he’s looking forward again, David glancing at him.

Logan: I’m sorry I called your junk disgusting. It’s not.

Panel 3

Front view of the both of them.

David: Maybe… we shouldn’t sleep so far away from each other. Just in case something happens.

Logan: Good idea.

Panel 4

Side view slight dutch angle of them crouching to lie down.

Panel 5

Aerial view of the two of them, their backs to each other.

Page 18

Panel 1

Close up of Logan, his eyes closed.

Panel 2

Close up of David, his eyes lidded, glancing down.

Panel 3

Close up of their hips. Logan has reached back and put his hand on David’s hip joint. A gesture of simple intimacy.

Panel 4

Close up of David, slight smile.

Panel 5

David’s placed his hand on top of Logan’s.

Panel 6

Large aerial shot.

Page 19

Panel 1

Close up of the altar by the tree. It doesn’t have anything on it.

Logan: Well shit.

Panel 2

Low angle of the two horses looking down at the altar, arms crossed.

Logan: The perverts didn’t give us any more food.

Panel 3

Side view, both of them have their ears perked up.

sfx: brrrrrrrrrrr

Panel 4

Close up of the altar - something is rising up through the stone at the center, like a hologram.

Panel 5

Close up. It’s a note. On it is written: touch.

Panel 6

Close up of Logan’s face, he’s rolling his eyes.

Logan: Good fucking grief.

Page 20

Panel 1

Side view, Logan’s shoulder in ultra foreground, David focus, looking at Logan askance.

David: What?

Logan: Well, now that we know what kind of stuff they want-

Panel 2

Logan reaches out and touches David’s sheath.

Panel 3

Chest up of the two of them, David is looking down at David’s hand.

David: Umm.. Little forward there aren’t ya?

Panel 4

Close up of Logan’s face.

Logan: Look, I’m hungry, and they probably won’t give us any food until we do what they want, so hurry up and grab mine and get this over with.

Panel 5

Close up of David, looking uncertainly down at Logan’s junk.

David: Um… okay.

Panel 6

Close up of their groins. Logan has his hand wrapped around David’s mostly soft sheath, and David’s hand is reaching for Logan’s emerging cock - just the bud is out.

Page 21

Panel 1

Semi aerial view of the two of them awkwardly standing there.

David: This is weird.

Logan: At least compliment my handjob skills.

David: okay: you give great handjobs.

Panel 2

Close up of their groins - they’re both hard, still jacking.

Logan: You’re hard.

David: So are you.

Panel 3

Both their faces.

David: So do you-?

Logan: No.

Panel 4

Close of Logan looking down, mollified.

Logan: Just…

Panel 5

High angle of their cocks, He’s squeezing David’s cockhead.

Logan: handjob’s a handjob, I guess.

Page 22

Panel 1

Focus on David, he’s looking at the altar.

David: Hey.

Panel 2

over their shoulders high angle, the altar has their food and water on it.

Panel 3

Fuller body, they’re just letting go of each other’s penises.

David: I guess we can-

Logan: Yeah -

Panel 4

Medium shot, the two of them have picked up their food and water.

Panel 5

Lower angle in front as they walk, their boners awkwardly bouncing.

David: Hey, Logan?

Logan: Hm?

David: You kinda do give a good handjob.

Logan: Dude.

Page 23

Panel 1

It’s evening, they’re sitting facing each other on the beach.

Logan: That was not enough fucking food.

David: I know.

Logan: What is the plan here, anyway? What do these sick fucks want?

Panel 2

Medium close of David.

David: Maybe they’re making a porno!

Panel 3

Close up of Logan.

Logan :*Snort* well screw that. I’m not touching your dick again.

Panel 4

David looks slightly hurt.

David: Is it really that bad?

Panel 5

Side view both of them.

Logan: You - you liked it?

David: No! Well, I mean… I’m just thinking that they might give us more food.

Panel 6

Logan looks slightly crestfallen.

Logan: Oh. Yeah. Sure.

Panel 7

Close up David

David: Sure?

Page 24

Panel 1

Close up David

David: Sure?

Panel 2

Wide angle shot, Logan has leaned back slightly and his soft cock is emerging.

Logan: Sure, go ahead. Whatever.

Panel 3

Side angle low, Logan and his cock in foreground, David approaching at a crouch.

Panel 4

The two of them kneeling in front of each other, David grabbing Logan’s cock, Logan slowly reaching for David’s.

Panel 5

Close up of their hands stroking their cocks, pulling them up in an x.

Panel 6

Stomach up, both of them looking over our heads.

Logan: Anything?

Panel 7

On the other side of them, we see what they’re looking at with them in the foreground: the altar is there, empty.

David: nope.

Panel 8

David is leaning in towards the tip of Logan’s cock, eyes still on the altar - Logan looks surprised.

David: I’m gonna try something.

Logan: what-

Page 25

Panel 1

Dutch angle, Logan is still holding David’s penis, David is sucking his cock.

Logan: David!

Panel 2

Close up of David sucking his cock.

David: Hmmmrg nnng?

Panel 3

Close up of Logan, still shocked.

Logan: What?

Panel 4

Lower angle, David pulling off of Logan’s cock.

sfx: slurp

David: How ‘bout now?

Panel 5

Close up of the altar. It has more food on it.

Logan: Fuck, you were right.

David: ‘Guess that settles it.

Logan: Meaning…

Panel 6

David is leaning back like Ron Jeremy, his cock jutting out invitingly.

David: See if they’ll give us more.

Panel 7

Looking down the barrel of David’s cock, pointing at Logan’s face like a gun. Logan is in a dazed state.

Page 26

Panel 1

Side view of Logan leaning down towards David’s cock with trepidation.

Panel 2

He’s opened his mouth, his tongue barely touching the tip as he opens.

Panel 3

Medium view of him going down on David.

David: hmmm.

Panel 4

Closer view, Logan looks distressed as he sucks.

Panel 5

His eyes close and he relaxes.

Panel 6

Side medium, he swallows 3/4 of David’s cock.

David: ohhhh wow!

Page 27

Panel 1

David lies down, Logan is following, David’s cockhead still in his mouth, looking at David out of the corner of his eye.

David: C’mere.

Panel 2

Logan swings his leg over David’s head, his cock dangling down, David grabbing the base of his cock.

Panel 3

Side view of the two of them 69ing

Panel 4

Close up of Logan. He’s gone all the way to the root, his eyes closed, lost in the act.

Panel 5

David has his mouth partially open off of Logan’s cockhead and is swirling his tongue over Logan’s cockhead.

Page 28

Panel 1

Logan’s butt, David’s hands on his hips.

Panel 2

The altar has tons of food and water on it, piling up.

sfx: brrrrrrrrrrrrr

Panel 3

Upside-down look at David’s face. He’s pondering something even as there’s a cock in his mouth.

Panel 4

We see what he sees - Logan’s ass.

Panel 5

Close up of David - halfway down Logan’s cock but trying to talk.

David: Mmmmf! Mmm!

Panel 6

Close up of Logan, pulling off of David’s cock and looking back worriedly.

sfx: slurp

Logan: Guh! what? You okay?

Panel 7

Logan has laid down on his side, David is sitting up wiping his lips.

David: *Huff* I figured it out! The riddle!

Logan: The… what?

Page 29

Panel 1

Close up of the riddle on the tree.

David: The riddle on the tree! The key lies within and within!

Medium, Logan’s back slightly to us, focus david.

David: Well… I think It means they’ll let us go…

Panel 2

Close up of Logan’s butt - David is putting his hand on it.

David: If we…

Panel 3

Medium shot of the two of them, Logan yelling.

Logan: Hell no!

David: But -

Logan: You - why would it be ME? You’re smaller!

Panel 4

Medium close of David

David: Well, I figured if I’m smaller, then it wouldn’t be as big a deal for you; I mean, maybe it wouldn’t be so uncomfortable?

Panel 5

Over their heads, the altar in the center. The altar is surrounded by apples that have fallen as their rewards. But a big bottle of lube has risen up, knocking more apples aside.

Panel 6

Close up of the bottle, Logan’s fist snatching it.

Panel 7

Low angle action shot, Logan throwing the bottle out into the ocean.

Logan: Raaaah!

Page 30

Panel 1

Shot of the ocean as the bottle of lube zooms out and lands in the water

sfx: sploosh

Panel 2

Aerial view, David has gotten to his feet and is in a wary stance as Logan screams at the sky.

Logan: FUCK YOU!

Panel 3

Logan is running 3/4 towards us, towards the water, tears in his eyes.

Logan: I’m not playing anymore! It’s not gonna be like that! Let me out!!

Panel 4

He splashes into the water, David running after him.

David: Logan!

Panel 5

Side view of Logan pounding his fist on the invisible wall.

Logan: It - wasn’t - supposed - to - be - this - way!

sfx: bam bam bam bam bam

Panel 6

View from behind, David foreground, Logan background.

Page 31

Panel 1

Close up of David.

David: Are you in on this?

Panel 2

Cowboy medium of Logan whirling to look at David in horror, tears still in his eyes.

Logan: Oh god no Dave!

David: Dave?

Logan: I -

Panel 3

Inset close up, Logan looking down and away, more tears coming.

Logan: I like you. I always have.

Panel 4

Side angle of both.

David: You mean, as in-

Logan: YES!

Panel 5

Close up of David

David: But - you were always trying to steal Sharon from me!

Panel 6

Medium close of Logan

Logan: I was jealous, okay! I wanted you, but I knew you didn’t want me, you only wanted her. God, I can’t explain, I was just a stupid kid!

Page 32

Panel 1

Further away shot of Logan

Logan: I just figured I might have a chance if she wasn’t yours anymore.

Panel 2

Closeup of David, stunned.

David: Logan, I-

Panel 3

sfx: SNAP

Panel 4

Aerial view - the island is still there, but there is now just a grey box that they’re in instead of ocean and sky.

Panel 5

Low angle view from their left side, looking up - there’s a viewing room built into the wall, with two scientists in lab coats. One’s an older cougar, and the other is a Fennec.

Cougar (burst): GOD FUCKING DAMN IT!

Page 33

Panel 1

Inset of a drain in the floor, the ocean water rapidly draining into it

sfx: whshhhhhh

Panel 2

Medium of the window, the cougar is screaming at the Fennec.

Cougar: He’s GAY?! HOW THE FUCK DID YOU NOT FIND THIS OUT!

Fennec: He put heterosexual on -

Cougar: And people ALWAYS tell the truth on forms?

Panel 3

Slight aerial view of the two horses, looking completely flabbergasted.

Fennec: No, but-

Cougar: The whole experiment is ruined! Research was your JOB!

Panel 4

Closer view, Logan shouting up at the window.

Logan: Excuse me!

Panel 5

Look at the window, with the two horses’ heads in the foreground.

The two scientists have frozen in their argumentative positions and have turned their heads to look.

Logan: What the fuck is going on here?

Panel 6

Medium of the Cougar, he’s leaned in and is yelling back.

Cougar: Yeah yeah, you’ve been participating in an experiment to see if a straight man will fall in love with another man under the right circumstances.

Cougar: But SOME moron fucked it all up, ‘cause you were already in love with him.

Page 34

Panel 1

Aerial shot of the room, straight on. A door in the wall opens up.

sfx: shoop

Cougar: Your things are in there. You’re free to go.

Panel 2

Close up of David.

David: What gives you the right to kidnap us like this!

Panel 3

The cougar looks down at them skeptically.

Cougar: We didn’t. You filled out a form to participate in a psychological study for $500 a day, didn’t you?

Panel 4

The two look at each other.

David: Well… now that you mention it…

Panel 5

Same angle, but they’ve turned back to the window.

Logan: But that doesn’t give you the right to take us without our knowledge!

Panel 6

Faraway angle of the window. The cougar looks bored.

Cougar: Didn’t do that either. When you arrived we gave you a sedative, with your consent, that erases your short term memory. You’ll receive a check in the mail in a week or so.

Panel 7

Exact same shot, the window area has gone black, the lights off.

sfx: click.

Page 35

Panel 1

Logan shouting foreground.

Logan: Hey! You get back here so I can knock your teeth in!

Panel 2

Same angle as before, window is still blank.

David: Logan. I think we should go.

Panel 3

Logan storming off through the door, David following him.

Panel 4

David stands at the doorway, looking back at the Island. The island is in foreground.

Page 36

Panel 1

They’re outside standing by a parking lot, fully clothed. They’re not sure what to do, not looking at each other.

David: So…

Panel 2

Close up of David, looking down sheepishly.

David: You really like me?

Panel 3

Logan walking away, David is surprised.

Panel 4

Logan foreground, looking determinedly down, still furious.

Page 37

Panel 1

Establishing shot of David’s house.

Panel 2

David has arrived in his foyer. His phone is buzzing.

sfx: bzz

Panel 3

Medium shot of him holding his phone.

Panel 4

Our view of his phone. On it is written (message request from Logan Dirk) Accept Decline

Panel 5

Close up of David’s face. He’s mildly confused and a little sad.

Panel 6

Close up of David’s thumb as he presses the accept button.

Panel 7

Close up of the text: I’m sorry I ran off. Can we talk?

Page 38

Panel 1

Upper floor of an apartment complex in the city.

Panel 2

The two of them are sitting in the living area, one on a couch and the other on a chair.

David: So, you never answered the question.

Logan: What question?

David: You really like me?

Panel 3

Close up of Logan.

Logan: Heh. I guess.

David: Hmm.

Panel 5

Medium of both of them, Logan gesturing at David. David’s laughing.

Logan: You know… it’s weird now, seeing you with clothes on.

David: Ha! I know what you mean.

Page 39

Panel 1

Medium wide of both of them, awkwardly silent.

Logan: Uh… Hrrm.

Panel 2

Medium of David.

David: Want me to come over there?

Panel 3

Close up of Logan nodding.

sfx: nod

Panel 4

Low angle, David on his feet, coming closer.

Panel 5

David sits down next to Logan.

Panel 6

Close up, the two of them touch their lips together, still somewhat in profile to each other.

Page 40

Panel 1

They’ve turned towards each other, knees touching, Kissing passionately.

Panel 2

Ultra close of the two of them.

Logan: It’s different when it’s real.

David: let’s see what else is different.

Panel 3

Close view Logan ultra foreground, Looking up at David as he stands over him, grabbing Logan’s pants.

Panel 4

Side view, He’s pulling Logan’s pants completely off, freeing Logan’s cock

Page 41

Panel 1

David has pulled his pants off, Logan is watching him sheepishly.

Panel 2

David gets on Logan’s lap, taking his shirt off.

Panel 3

Close up of their kiss.

Panel 4

Close up of their cocks

Panel 5

Close up of Logan taking David’s penis in his mouth.

Panel 6

Wide angle shot of logan giving him a blowjob.

Page 42

Panel 1

Looking down at Logan sucking.

Panel 2

Looking up at David.

David: Mmmf. You’re good.

Panel 3

Logan pulls off slightly, close up.

Logan: I’ve got practice - sucking myself off.

Panel 4

David laughing

David: Ha! The joys of being a horse!

Panel 5

Logan has continued to suck, close up, looking up at David with smiling eyes.

Panel 6

David and logan, dutch angle, David sweetly holding Logan’s cheeks as Logan sucks.

David: Logan. When it’s time… could I be on top?

Page 43

Panel 1

Close up of Logan, looking up at David trustingly.

Logan: mm hmm

Panel 2

David steps back onto the floor. Logan looks surprised.

Logan: What, now?

David: I can’t wait. Please?

Panel 3

Logan getting to his knees on the couch and raising his tail.

Logan: Just… go slow?

Panel 4

Lower angle side, David approaching, holding his penis and lining it up, Logan looking back at him trustingly.

David: Dont’ worry.

Panel 5

Close up of his cockhead pressing against Logan’s asshole

Panel 6

Close up of Logan’s face, closing his eyes.

Panel 7

Close up of his cockhead slipping in.

Page 44

Panel 1

Side view, David’s halfway in.

Logan: Ohhhhhgod.

Panel 2

From front, Logan’s face in ultra foreground.

David: you good?

Logan: *grunt* yeah.

Panel 3

From underneath, it’s clear that David is balls deep now.

Logan: God you’re big.

Panel 4

Close up low angle of David smiling down at Logan.

Page 45

Panel 1

David’s view of Logan’s back as he humps into him.

Panel 2

Close up of David’s face

David: You’re so hot!

Panel 3

View of the pair of them together.

Panel 4

Side view close up of David’s cock almost all the way out.

Panel 5

Close up same angle 3/4 of the way in.

Logan: Mmmgh!

Page 46

Panel 1

Logan’s cock squirting onto the sofa.

Logan: Ughh!

Panel 2

Close up David’s face, contorted in orgasm.

David: Oh god!

Panel 3

Side view, he’s buried balls deep, cum squirting out.

David: hahh!

Panel 4

Wide view, David leaning over Logan’s back, keeping himself inside, Logan looking dazedly back at him.

David: *huff* *huff* sorry I didn’t last long.

Logan: *hah* perfect for a first time.

Panel 5

Close up of their faces.

David: Perfect?

Logan: Yes.

Panel 6

Ultra close of Logan’s face, looking down and to the side.

Logan: Fuck those scientists though.

Page 47

Panel 1

Close up of David’s face, laughing.

David: ha!

Panel 2

Close up of David’s cock slipping out of Logan’s butt.

Panel 3

David is laying down on top of Logan, face to face.

David: Don’t blame them too much, though.

Panel 5

Close up of the two of them, David resting his head on Logan’s chest.

David: That island was the best thing that’s ever happened to me.

Logan: Me too.

Panel 6

Establishing shot, the sun has set, still with warm colors in the sky, stars coming out.

The end (written in stars)