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Our little girl, sent back into the big bad world! We can only hope this ends well... ^_^ 

To read what came before, see this folder that contains everything.

Written by Peculiar Changeling. Art by me!

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"Lock Up". Hahaha, too soon, too soon! I love how Delilah goes from suggestive and "hot" to matter-of-fact and "cold" so quickly (perhaps deliberately?). The last page ended on something really suggestive, but then she snaps right back with the reality of the situation: diaper rash isn't fun.

Aika

What's Delilah going to do before she leaves? 😁

Anonymous

I'm half-excited, half-terrified to see where this is going.

hofbondage

Mhmm. I see what you mean, but.... I gotta say, that wasn't the intention. That's my bad, actually. I initially drew Delilah with different facial expressions on this page. She was still really warm and a little suggestive, even. But she was grinning like a madwoman all the time, and it was getting unnerving, so I redrew the expressions, getting some more variety in her acting, and fitting more with the dialogue she's delivering, but possibly not paying too close attention to the sudden change of attitude from the previous page. I'm glad you noted this, I should have paid more attention to that. I usually do, in the script phase, but as I said, I felt something needed to change. I just might have changed the wrong thing...

Anonymous

Did he ask for a ride home 🤔. I wonder if he got a cab and will get home first. I imagine after so long a part he isn't gonna want to wait to see her.

JeriD

If she has to go so bad, I have a suggestion as to where ^_^

Alex W.

Why do I feel like asking her to lock up is going to backfire on poor Jenny? Or maybe I'm just paranoid given the trouble she's had ^_^

Aika

This comic is too short for red herrings, and everything you put in it matters. So I don't believe her leaving Delilah to lock up has no consequences to it 😏

Anonymous

Loving all the new pages so far, just going to comment on this one as a tell-all for all the ones posted the last little while, got super busy with work and life and etc so been hard to keep up with things, sorries X.x

hofbondage

Lol. To me, it just makes sense. Jenny's in a hurry, and she trusts Delilah. :-D That said.... why can't it be both a no-red-herring AND a sensible story progression?..... :-P