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﹝Old Webcomic - ( 2014 / 07 / 15 )﹞ 

中文版:https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=44729964


I recently asked a friend to help 

translate my old Elsword comics into English.

I hope one day I'll be able to update them in both CHT and ENG.

Because English isn't our first language,

the translations might not be 100% correct.

If you spot anything that's wrong or sounds weird, 

please let us know!


This comic is a continuation of the official PV.

After seeing Add appear, I decided to draw this

because I wanted to take him down a notch.


You can download the no-text version with speech bubbles,

or a lower resolution version with the speech bubbles removed.


最近我請我朋友協助英翻過去創作的艾爾之光短篇漫畫,

希望能在未來這些漫畫更新時,也能同步更新英文版本,

因為我們都的母語都並非英文,所以翻譯也並非百分百正確,

如有任何地方覺得不流暢或錯誤,也歡迎提出協助我們改進!


這篇是官方PV的延續,當時艾迪這個角色剛登場,

打算削弱一下這壞傢伙的銳氣,於是便畫了這篇。


最後,你也可以在此下載到移除文字但保留對話框的版本,

或文字與對話框均移除、但解析度較低的純插圖版本。

 

----- \ For patrons / -----


My awesome patrons will get:

 -  ( Tier2 & Tier3 ) Full-res PNG ( CHT version )

 -  ( Tier2 & Tier3 ) Full-res PNG ( ENG version )  

 -  ( Tier2 & Tier3 ) Full-res PNG ( speech bubbles removed ) 

 -  ( Tier3 ) Full-res PSD & CLIP ( with all layers & sketch ) 

of this piece at this month's rewards!

( You will receive this rewards next month! ) 


而我的patrons將能得到:

 -  ( Tier2 & Tier3 ) 原畫質PNG ( 中文版 )

 -  ( Tier2 & Tier3 ) 原畫質PNG ( 英文版 ) 

 -  ( Tier2 & Tier3 ) 原畫質PNG ( 無對話框版 )  

 -  ( Tier3 ) 原畫質PSD & CLIP ( 圖層保留 & 草稿 ) 

作為這個月的回饋之一!

(你將於下個月收到這項回饋!)


----- \ Attention to / ----- 


※ I mostly use CLIP STUDIO PAINT to paint.

Some layer properties in Photoshop may not be supported.

So I provide CLIP file for you to make sure it is no problem.

Please use CLIP STUDIO PAINT to open it. 


※我大部分都是用CLIP STUDIO PAINT來作畫。

部分圖層效果在Photoshop中可能不會被支援,

所以我提供你CLIP檔以確保他在顯示上沒問題,

請使用CLIP STUDIO PAINT來開啟它。

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Comments

x179b24

Very, very nice! Thanks for this!

Chung

I really like the amount of references~ Back in the day, I also used infinite wall combos with Add until it was patched haha

Anonymous

First, Thanks to your friend for the translation ! Second, I'm sorry, I don't want to be the bad guy, but i'm not sure to understand every sentence. (But don't worry i can read and understand a lot of them !) I'm not the best in english and i'm not even english xD, but i think there are some errors. I would like to translate it in french after (if you don't mind), but i need to understand properly what characters want to say. I'll make some research ! ^^

waero

Maybe you can tell me which part wrong or sounds weird?

Anonymous

Don't worry too much about it, it's already a BIG gift you've made to us ^^. I'll try my best to help ! :D Some examples : For : "So as to analyzing you, who contain plenty of nasod codes...". I suggest : "In order to analyze you, which contains plenty of nasod codes...". For : "Eve..become to my women" I suggest : "Eve.. be my wife" or "Eve.. become my wife". As an other way of speaking, i will say : "Eve...you have to become my wife !" If Add won't leave Eve the choice. "I said you should not be like the M-type of oberon is it ?" I don't really understand this sentence. I think "M-type" is a joke on Oberon being a masochist, because he like been stepped on (trampled on), and that's why the next image tell that he lost on purpose. So, did Add mean something like : "Tell me, you aren't a masochist (M-type) like Oberon, are you ?" or : "I haven't told you to be like this masochist (M-type) of Oberon, have i ?" Did something match on what you wanted to tell ? I'll try to correct it on my computer. ^^

Anonymous

I have made a google document, but i haven't finished it yet. Here is the link: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_JL0y_LWrpl9bNeG0zdUNeOqHJUkPsQL8iZpgTAkmjM/edit?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_JL0y_LWrpl9bNeG0zdUNeOqHJUkPsQL8iZpgTAkmjM/edit?usp=sharing</a>

Anonymous

I almost finished, but i need some informations: - In the 4th image: who is speaking after Eve Empress say "....." ? Eve Nemesis or Add ? - In the 5th image: who Eve Nemesis wanted to trample ? Oberon or Add ? - In the 7th image: when Raven RF say "Male..? Can i pass ?". He want to fight Add or he don't wan't to fight Add ?

waero

In the 4th image: EN In the 5th image: Oberon, because Oberon like to get hurt so he always lose. In the 7th image: RF is only interested in women. He notice this guy is a male so he won't fight.