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I'm so sorry this wasn't updated sooner. I got hung up trying to write a story I had writer's block on, and then... just... depression took over. :/ I'm finally over myself, and writing again.

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JZZY

Well I can’t do anything about depression but I can write how I feel about your new story. I love a good possession story. This chapter gets straight to it, we have the rules the ghost is bound by and than transformation. Despite the focus n him we don’t much about James, the ghost considers him a stalker, boring and creepy. We know hes superstitious and may have felt the ghost presence and researching that lead him to try and use them to force the girl of his dreams to love him. As for the ghost they’ve been bound to the home they died in and where stuck observing the one person who moved in long after their death. They are an opportunist eagerly trying to altar the spell so they could benefit from it. Now they already have control of his body it seems they can just be happy at that and leave it there. Still we don’t know whats happened to James, if hes swapped places or if he is in her mind or perhaps something else. I do prefer possession stories that have the posses slowly weave themselves over the person their taking or the victim being in some control of their body. With this I’m very curious where james went. Also well done on 9 pages for the first chapter.