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Delinquency Record 31 complete draft (Patreon)

Published:
2020-03-06 23:24:23
Imported:
2021-08

Content

Completed first draft of Ch. 31 of Delinquency Record. Comment please. Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bo1kVT2UgYpPdUebCZUabSETOAgm3g8kBf3M2ztUMZs/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Anonymous

I suck at constructive criticism but I do like the idea of Berlin trying to point Tanya where she will do the least damage/most good for them. The Turkish court is one of those scenarios where Tanya succeeding in her own expectations is sure to be such huge overkill as to upset everybody or if there's too much opposition (ie internal Turk politics or predjudices) and everything goes wrong Tanya's escape will also upset everybody.