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And we're back with more TRW! :D

Having written scripts for both comics and a visual novel, I can say what defines comic dialog is that it has to be tight as hell by comparison. Between the desire to keep the pacing snappy and the physical confines of limited space on the page, there truly isn't room for a single wasted word.

This wasn't anything I didn't already know, but MAN has that concept just been drilled into my forehead while attempting to juggle so many characters in one scene. Hopefully it will come together well in the end here. In the meantime please let me know what you think of the page and how things are coming along!