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Remember how I said I'd post well before I went to bed? I was wrong on that, lol. But I think I can sleep well enough on this one, despite working until the last minute.  I think I'm happy with how it all came together, but don't be surprised if I end up making some tweaks tomorrow. 

Since I might be refining a few things tomorrow, now's a good time for feedback! What do you think? This is one of the wordier pages I've done in awhile, curious to hear how it goes over. 

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SpiceofVice

All over the room? Hmm, wonder how big his whole load is.

Chris Davis

I feel so bad for Chloe...Maybe she needs to spy on her Mom and Sylvia more....Those two seem to have genuine feelings for each other...Or better yet, she needs a foreign exchange student to arrive from Europe and sweep her off her feet! Much to the dismay of her Mother and Brother...Just my two cents worth of a future story idea...Maybe I'll commission that...

eF..cz

Brilliant. And the plot tightens. Will she fall?

Anonymous

Perhaps Chloe, being one of the visual novel characters, encourages you to write more lengthy inner monologue by proxy? Either way, loving it. Chloe continues to be the highlight in every scene she's in. <3

The Funny Hatter

I think my hear t would stop if a woman cosplayed perfectly as Chloe in this outfit.

rah

Does she know that movies like Notting Hill exist?

frank barry

Is Liz bird watching right now?

frank barry

Where’s that squirrel?

frank barry

Branch gonna break? Or will she squirt on someone below? (and that person becomes her new love interest?)

Reinbach

I've never seen that one, so I guess that means she doesn't. Is it about spying on people?

Reinbach

Would certainly be an interesting way to meet your special someone! XD

rah

Hahaha, no, it's more of a 90's romcom, but a pretty good one. It's a bit depressing and a little cliche to be honest, but I'd watch it if it's on.

frank barry

Raccoon pounce?