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I notice I've developed two nasty habits lately. One is working until the very last minute on Thursdays, and the other is suddenly wanting to make drastic dialog changes during that last minute. This can be dangerous because I prefer to let the dialog kick around my head for hours on end while I'm drawing to make sure there aren't any issues with it that didn't occur to me at first. Robbed myself of that luxury on this one lol, so I'm counting on you guys to let me know if it works as intended because at this point I'm too close to it to tell without sleeping on it first. Might make some tweaks tomorrow depending on feedback! :)


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Anonymous

I like the way the diolauge works. Really conveys that Raina is ready to get absolutely fucked in the next few pages. And I'm totally down for it.

NKL

That front view of Raina is amazing!

SpiceofVice

What I wouldn’t give to join those 3 in the tub.

Squid Hills

A sling bikini on a super curvy woman is the hottest thing in the universe.

Karmagik

Sling bikini + Thicc MILF with huge tits = Huge Win!

HungryOuroboros

Sylvia looks amazing in the third panel, holy cow. This page in general looks superb, your attention to light and shadow truly is amazing.

Vylon Delta

Oh, well my deduction of Sylvia’s motives was way off…or not 🤞🏻🤞🏻

Chris Davis

The dialog was fine, in my opinion! Can't wait for the next few pages!! Raina and Sylvia are my favorites!!

colin r

Your hindbrain seems to have done fine with the last-minute dialog. Now I have to stare at Raina some more.

rah

You know, I think the dialog is juuuuuust fine.

colin r

I do wonder what the original dialog was. I try to write comics myself sometimes and I'm curious about process. (I understand why you might not want to share.)