MORE than a MOUTHFUL - Prelimary Sketches - PAGE 2 (+ Page 1 progress) (Patreon)

(SPOILER WARNING: these are the blueprints for the current comic. If you'd like to be surprised, wait until the finished comic is up before checking out the prelims!)

So here we see page 2 going from extremely rough concepts to eventually finalizing the general flow and then finally getting all the panels in place. 

Then there's several progress images of page one getting slight detail shifts until everything finally starts to coalesce into something that feels right ^^