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"A Story Before Bed" page 5 (Patreon)

Published:
2018-10-18 02:36:20
Imported:
2021-01

Content

Fuki's story finally begins. Hopefully the narrative style with multiple characters chiming in isn't too difficult to follow here.

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Occ

MSTing a fanfic within a story! Now I've seen everything! :3

Glenn Sellers

I LOVE the kibitzing. A lot of those comments sounds like me when I offer unrequested advice. So, which comment is whose? I have figured out the the white comments/narration belong to Fuki, though.

ES_Productions
>>16404215

I may tweak it for best effect as I go, but the white boxes are from Fuki (with the fully squared-off ones being her reciting from the story), the gray balloons are from Doug, and the peach-colored ones are from Holly. (they're also a bit meaner)

draegwolf

reminds me of watching Mystery Science Theater

Delisle

What was Terry Pratchett's term? 'Narrative causality'..., being part of a story explains the most nonsensical stuff! I figured out which words were Fuki-chan's, but thanks for clarifying the other two.