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Action Toys page 18 (Patreon)

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2023-07-31 20:27:47
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For my personal opinion this page, though not outstanding in any other aspect, have the best storytelling flow.

UPD: Significant art edits on top panel. Some changes on the bottom too

Drawn a little rougher then before, I decided to firstly finish current bunch of pages - three left - and then make final edits for pages 16 to 21. Now working on page 19.

So far I didn't seen pages 16-17 outside of my Patreon, I assume that my convoluted way to hide them from scrappers is working. I still leave a WiP watermark, though it's smaller this time. If I don't find AT outside by the time 19 page will be ready I will stop adding them completelly.

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kou32

took a little hunting but found it, love the jojo refence and the expression work

Deviantmaster222

God how do you blow my mind every time you update? Those eyes are divine

kou32
>>114174809

Do, didn't get it in the mail. Had to click the tag link and scroll still I found the direct link.

SanePerson
>>114174809

shit, I forgot that I wanted to simply write a link in the mail version -_- But pages that i attached should still be downloadable.

George

Perspective is *chef’s kiss*

lightning blue

It might just be that I’m being dumb, but I can’t find it

lightning blue
>>114179510

Turns out I’m just dumb, if you follow the instructions and go to the bottom of the page you will find the link

JoeForest

The new page is excellent! And I'm loving the *conditioning* that these girls are going for - I adore how you draw Raven especially, but they both look delectable. Excited to see how it develops!

Xianroberts

I love the nod to promethium DCs adamantium. It shows the author really is a fan

Xianroberts

Also I am loving the control collars idea! Maybe instead of sexual acts the girls could be made to give foot massages or shoulder rubs.

s22132

Another great page. :)

IvyReed
>>114184335

Well that'll be a mite difficult considering their bondage.

Anonymous
>>114174809

I did get all three attachments (16, 17, 18) at the bottom of the email. But that was after I went on the easter egg hunt on the patreon page, that was fun!

SanePerson
>>114184224

It's also the only one that sounds normal. I were thinking on using batmanium for comedic effect, but decided to not to, since reader may think that I came up with this word)

Shremedy

The one little thing I'd do differently, and this is VERY minor, would be to use a spiky or rough-edged font for the sound effects of the "toys" at work in punishment mode as opposed to reward mode.

Second of Many

I can see what you mean about the visual flow - really strong visual storytelling here. Another fun page

Zillavader

So I’m confused, are you going to finish making them first and then come back to touch up on them? Or are you going to do the current page, then finish up the touch up afterwards? Also, are you going to do morning those animated pages and such, or was that a one time thing? Keep up the amazing work.👍🏻👍🏻

SanePerson
>>114602525

yes, gonna draw them all first, then do another round on each of them fixing mistakes, before calling them final. Three pages left from part 2 including 19th I currently working on. And there will be more animated pages, but I gonna animate only pages that really worth it, so mainly animation will be in part 3 where the most sex scenes will be. Maybe page 21 will be animated too, i'm not decided yet

Anonymous

i just get back to the patreon site when i click the link...?

SanePerson
>>114951442

it's not a link, it's a tag. Either copy it and put into your browser, or click on it and scroll way down to the bottom post - link will be in it.