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Poll - FINAL CORE (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-04 07:00:31
Imported:
2022-06

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Hello, making a FINAL CORE poll for all tiers today!


Some feedback has left me wondering if I should make some larger adjustments, particularly on the topics of pacing (Are we currently too fast?) and the subject of Isaiah’s desire to get stronger. (Are we currently too bloodthirsty?)


I’d really love to get your feeling on this, as this is my first dungeon-core and I am still new to the genre and its ways, so there is very much to learn. =)

Comments

Anonymous

I think starting off with fast growth is good since in most stories the protagonist rapidly gains power early on ,like maybe once we get to like floor 30-40 slow it down a bit and flesh stuff out but for now it's working really good!!!!

Halfcrzy

Honestly, I think your pace is too fast. We went from micromanaging every berry and rock, to somehowmagically floors are made every hour. We lost alot of the smaller world building I find, and a bit of the logic. Within a week he nearly has a mid-level dungeon, and some how people are already there. I suppose the flow of the story is alright, but stretch out the timeline to months instead of hours.

DungeonCultist
>>85273359

Thank you for the feedback! I will make a note to have the pacing go a bit deeper, rather than wider =)