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Max Freeman

Soo, the teasing continues; I have to say, I'll admit defeat, but my idea would have also worked. Prior to this, I would have gone with a strip tease (next pages) Although, it was a fine read, I would have preferred them to continue the kissing and groping. I wanna make it interesting, and I can see you want that too. A little tongue action, exploring kind of sex, it's called seducing. I love the way Gadot guided Tobias' military style. That said, hope they make it to the bedroom after they get Tyson good and ready.

galkimera

They chapter is incredible and push so much buttons to me (//ω//)

Maririn

I know exactly what you like. I don't know if this chapter will be exactly to your taste, but it will definitely be different from the usual sex between the two of them. Indeed, the way Charr leads Tobias as a private is one of the highlights of this chapter, I am glad you liked it.

Max Freeman

Well, I’m not a fan of sex toys for one, when you say different from the sex, I’m worried, but I’m sure it's in good hands.

Maririn

Well, don't worry too much about what happens next, just take it easy and enjoy the development. If you don't like it, you can stop reading at any time.

Chibi_Wuff

That amount of foreplay and edging really hits the right spot <3

Vaska

I hope they use the sounding rod on him!

Karmakat

I have to admit that it's quite HOT...even if I would love to turn it around on those 2 hehe

Maririn

Oh sounding rod! It may still be too high level for him! That kind of play is an an unknown territory for me too haha. But your feedback is helpful, thanks!

Karmakat

mostly the Sergent...I would love to make him scream for more hehe

Maririn

I understand what you mean. For those who feel disgust or anger toward ”villains” like Johnathan and Charr, I want them to consider why they feel those emotions. Stories can be an opportunity to examine our own inner feelings. It is sad that many people do not understand this. I hope they will understand when this story is all completed… Sorry, this is not directed at you, just a talking to myself haha

Karmakat

LOL, I THINK we have a misunderstanding here. I have no anger with him even if I am convinced it was his plan from the start. it's just the kind of character that I just LOVE to see the other side off when they aren't the ones in control. but yeah, the rest you know even if not really fitting to what i am feeling right now. I had a guy go raging against me because after we talked a few times and "wanted to work with me" discovered that i am also an activist for minorities, not just LGBTQIA+ but also Immigrants and such. for a minute i was a bit shocked, wonder WHERE that came from since I am doing it since years, online, in real life and in my stories to TRY to help people understand what we feel and go through. but after, I laughed at his face and told him that he will just LOVE the new story I am working on about a guy with immigrant family from Africa and cops too to TRY TO SHOW that not everything is as they see and not everyone is to be put in the same bag. the guy left PISSED OFF, I LAUGHED EVEN MORE. people like that think that i "live" for likes, followers, people going crazy about my work while even if hope to make people dream, i don't need people to validate who i am to go on with my work. I have no ego "thanks" to my parents. I sure don't need FAKE compliments 'oh it's so wonderful' with no real explanation or anything unlike some people. but yeah, with you and your writer that I know a bit, I always look forward to see how the stories goes. the sex is a bonus. hehe

Maririn

Oh thanks for sharing your great episode with us. I can tell from your writing that you have a lot of experience in a variety of areas. I recently received a message from someone about Charr and I just wanted to talk to myself. I know exactly what you mean. I'm glad you enjoyed this story that way!

Karmakat

as you could read in some of my stories, I am pretty sure you know that I 'touch' many different subjects and involved even. concerning the fans, it's nice to have comments yeah but don't base yourself or your reaction on them is what I can advise you. MANY PEOPLE tried and keep trying to destroy my writing and hoping to make me stop, to the point of attacking me in the street twice. I got many insults in many ways about points that aren't even in the stories just proving me people are often idiots. so, like with the guy I mentioned earlier, don't put weight into everything they tell you. at times it will be to get something out of you, at times to try to destroy you because they are idiots and don't like the story because they WANTED IT DIFFERENTLY. BUT YOU AND THE WRITER, that I don't mention the name on purpose for him, ARE THE PERSON IN CONTROL, NOT THE OTHERS THAT DO NOTHING BUT COMPLAIN. don't go try to find validation in every comments from people, know who you are and continue on your OWN path. because, I think that you both do a VERY GOOD JOB, even if I admit I am jealous of him at times. hehe you are both GREAT, don't let others tell you otherwise.

Maririn

Have you ever been attacked in the street? It is amazing to write a story that has the impact to make people go that far. Glad you are safe. Your advice is convincing and encouraging. Usually when I am emotionally moved by a comment, I look inside myself to see if there must be a reason for it. Today I just had to express my true feelings in my reply to you, sorry. Thank you for your profound insight and generosity.

Karmakat

Honestly, your answer didn't hurt or Schock me. Not only what you had said was very true, but it was also a misunderstanding. Hehe And yeah it happened at conventions for 2 reasons. One being an activist that say what he thinks and protects even strangers doesn't make you friends with everyone. But also because I always say what I think even to popular people, some appreciate real comments while others accuse you of bursting their "Bubble" while exposing the truth about them to people. Then getting their fans angry for hurting "their gods" But in my situation, I can't take detours or kiss ass so I go the direct honest line because I am me and only pretend to be someone else when I was acting in theater. That's also why only real comments made to help me progress ate the ones I talk with people in a gentle debate. Not the fake ones getting me nowhere or "hurted" someone that wanted a different story. Also why, not like Disney, I do my best to kitty leave plot holes not letting a reader not understanding what happened. In the end, I am me. Not whatever image people have of me without even trying to know me.

Maririn

You have established your self perfectly and it is wonderful. Sometimes I have a hard time affirming my self because I feel like I don't belong in this whole world haha. Your perspective is very helpful to me. Thank you so much for your time.

Karmakat

We ALL BELONG AND DIVERSITY IS WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS! never let people convince you that you aren't because you are a WONDERFUL PERSON and sure deserve more than aome jerks we all have to deal with.

Maririn

Haha thank you for saying so, your powerful words are so encouraging!

Karmakat

It's just the truth and no flourish lol. I meant every words.

Mbg Dsj

I've been refresh this page every Saturday and Sunday to see if new chapter are posted, and finally!!