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Final sketch update. I feel like previous version is little bit too dark so i change wade death a bit. Next up date will begin coloring the entire comic yippy....

As alway if you want to help me fix grammar or have any suggestion please teel me in the comment. 

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StarGazer

Still love how it's turning out

D Banks

How did she kill him here absorption I think the other one is better.

Roxanne Giling

I wanna say this is better. It doesn't feel as rapey as it did before :) Edits incoming!

Roxanne Giling

Page 1: 1: Obstruction detected. Relocating body mass. Simulating muscle. Enhancing unit's physical strength. 2: Gah, what the hell?! My apologies, Mr. Wade, but I must follow Mistress's command. Boss, sir! You must stop this madness! You can't let her program you like some mindless robot! My personality core is functioning perfectly, Mr. Wade Analyzing... Your heart rate is increasing. Wha?! 3: Blood pressure is increasing in a specific area. Detecting an increase in testosterone. All data indicates that you are aroused. Does my body stimulate you, Mr. Wade? No... no... boss! How can you say that?! Gah, get off of me! You are lying, Mr. Wade. All of your biological responses are indicative of male sexual desires. You fancy my new appearance. This is a fact. 4: I should be disgusted by my own words. By this whole situation. A man is looking at me with lust. Even worse, it's my own subordinate! Wha?! Boss!! But I can't feel anything. My only desire is to carry out Mistress's orders. I will love Mr. Wade just as she told me to. Boss! This isn't right! You're not yourself! Go on, Mr. Wade. Touch me. 5: Miller! Sir! You need to snap out of it!! Do my soft breasts arouse you, Mr. Wade? My data shows that they do. Stop! This is messed up! Damnit! Sorry, Mr. Wade. I must follow my orders. Just a few minutes ago, this girl was my commander. He tried to protect us from that crazy scientist. Now, my commander is crawling over me with her breasts pressed formly on my body.

Roxanne Giling

Page 2: 1: Why do you resist, Mr. Wade? Don't you want me? Is this girl really captain Miller? I know I watched him transform with my own eyes but I still hardly believe it. She's so beautiful. Her voice, her face, her body, it's so alluring... Resistance is futile, Mr. Wade. Just let your instincts take over... Stop sir! Don't talk to me like that! 2: Wha?! Allow me to make it easier. 3: Do you like it, Mr. Wade? My newly formed breasts. You are the second person in the world to ever touch them. Damnit! She knows which buttons to push! It's like she can read my mind! I'm falling for her. I must focus! This is the captain! I can't let myself enjoy this...?! 4: You can do even more than that, Mr. Wade. I'm a woman and I love you. Every touch from you is making me happy. No, this isn't love! It's...! Does it really matter, Mr. Wade? Let us just forget everything and enjoy each other. I can't stop myself... She knows what I want to hear. It's almost like hypnosis... 5: I... I no longer see this metal girl as captain Miller... this girl is everything I desire. I'm falling under her spell and I know it. Is it... is it so bad to indulge myself with her?

Roxanne Giling

Page 3: 1: I... I... I detect contact on my rear. It feels good, does it not, Mr. Wade? Boss... Please, do as you wish. Every fiber of my nanite body are for you to experience. 2: Every. Single. One. 3: Are you enjoying yourself, Mr. Wade? It seems like I don't have to worry about Prima's mental stability. Despite your history with Mr. Miller, Prima still obeys my orders without any glitches so far. Thanks to your former captain, Prima is able to creatively think and execute her orders without any additional input. Are you still with us, Mr. Jude? Pay attention. I want you to see this. 4: I'm about to make Prima do something Mr. Miller would never do. Do you know what that is? No... you don't mean... Stop! Don't do it!!! 5: Prima 6: Kill Mr. Wade Order received. Processing... Emotional core offline. Returning to default stage.

Roxanne Giling

Page 4: 1: Command is in strong conflict with my base personality core belief. But my directives say that Mistress's orders must take priority. Unless I can contradict Mistress's command by proving that sparing subject Wade's life will be more beneficial to Mistress's goals. Analyzing... Calculating subject Wade's value... Calculating required resources for subject recruitment... 2: Analysis complete. The resources required outweigh the subject's potential value. Action denied. 3: Continue termination of the subject. I'm killing him. My own team mate. My liquid metal body is slowly suffocating him. I cannot stop myself. I have calculated and decided his fate within a millisecond. No compassion. No hesitation. Efficient. 4: Some part of my personality core still wishes that I can muster some emotion from this action. Fortunately, Mistress's program has no flaw. She has successfully turned me into an emotionless killing machine. 5: Miller, stop! You're killing him! Miller!! 6: Subject's vital signs at critical levels.

Roxanne Giling

Page 5: 1: Scanning... No longer detecting subject Wade's vital signs. Releasing subject's body I want to feel at least some kind of guilt but I can not. Even watching Wade's lifeless body falling off my metallic mass does nothing for me. Instead, I feel the hint of pleasure of a machine doing its job lingering in my mind. 2: Subject Wade has been terminated. Objective complete 3: Very good job, Prima! You have passed all the tests! Thank you, Mistress. How does it feel, Prima? To kill your friends with your own hands? I feel nothing, Mistress. I have adjusted my emotional core to not hinder my objectives. Mistress's wish must take priority over everything else. 4: Good answer, Prima! You've come a long way from that mutt Miller. I'm so proud of you! Wade... Miller... You... You!!!

Roxanne Giling

Page 6: 1: You bitch... I'll kill you... I'll kill you! I'll fucking kill you!!!! 2: Encryption key generated Password matching Admin rights granted System override Shutting down security bot... 4: What the... Ms. Jude? How did you-?! 5: Mr. Wade virus...?! <- I don't quite know what you mean to say here

Roxanne Giling

Page 7: 1: I'm gonna... 2: ... tear that smug face... 3: ... to pieces!!!!!! 4: Please refrain from harming Mistress, Ms. Jude. This is your final warning. Miller.... Please, call me Prima.

Arbiter

Death by being smothered; heck of a way for Wade to go. Guess we'll find out what happens next in a future comic.

M

Wow, this is so long I don't blame you for pausing here. I guess suffocation is less dark than drowning visually since we don't see freaking Mercury coming out of his eye. Anyway this is utterly fantastic! I can't wait for Jude's TF, new name and personality. Wonder what role she'll play and if Iron is coming up next?

Gustavo Tani

I like, though its a shame wade cant be re-used like miller, maybe a suggestion on prima's part and then have the doctor order the kill anyway?

ibenz009

Wade try to hack security bot on page 7. It's just one dialouge so not strange you forget it.

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 So, after this, are you going to open up a poll for the next comic?

Anonymous

That is surely greatest rework i've seen for last five years.

hawk Mitora

June vs prima throwing hands

Anonymous

It's probably a but late but I feel like it would be better if Prima didn't have the Miller dialogues instead of the monologue about having no emotion but wanting to feel it. A sinple "Task completed successfully, No emotional response produced, reporting to Mistress" Also on page 23-25 I personally like the idea that Miller becomes a 1 to 1 reflection of primary and not just a female Miller than obeys, but that's just my suggestions and they are probably too late anyway, still loving it!

Anonymous

W ondee if oter girl is going to become slime g irl too, but using virus gets her independen CE and figh back