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Third version for aria demon form

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Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Now that's more like it! That said, before I send you the next round of feedback, a few questions. 1. Do you really like asymmetry on Aria? 2. And are you open on revealing more skin on her, or do you try to cover her up a bit?

Anonymous

Not sure if it was my comment that got her horn-things changed but I love the new design a lot more. They're good as is but if you're not satisfied yet you could try giving them a more ethereal and jagged look like the markings on her legs and upper-left arm rather than the narrow batwing-spiky things they are now. If the previous design was a 7/10 this one feels more like an 8.5/10 and I'm jealous, I wish I could character design that well.

Anonymous

Maybe increase her hips? to make her look more like a spirit or something. I think this is my personal preference, but if she had in version 1 (with open skin) were closed eyes (Mask) as a blood mage (one of the options) it would be generally wonderful.

Asani

1. Dual-forms is interesting and offers story flexibility. I personally like the asymmetry in non-combat mode; it communicates that the second one is her true form and the shadows are always fighting to envelope her. 2. The staff => tail / flail concept is really good. 3. Original "antennae" horns were good, but I like this shape too. The curves are too clean though and clash with the rest of her shadowy outline I think. Maybe leave them like this in her partially uncovered mode, but they take on a more spiky or misty shape in the second?

Anonymous

She should look less defined and more spectral when in full shadow form.

Anonymous

Yeah. I wouldn't mind the obscured legs look from the other versions brought back for that form.

Cylestea

love the way she looks

MagicCobra911

I wouldn’t second guess on the design too much but yeah I think the legs being a bit more obscured in the shadows is a design choice that should be kept.

Benjamin Lawton

Honestly, I think I liked the "bangs" better than the current version – this new one, I honestly can't help but be reminded of Morrigan Aensland.

DuckHunter

I do like the second one more.

Chris N

I like v2 with the "bangs" as well, much more than these "batwings".

John Hynden

I really hope Aria is not becoming evil :(

Nightmare49

oh its a great design. Just tits should be the size of beach balls or yoga balls. XD Cause i would love to see one girl oith tits that size. XD

Arthur Yeung

@Nightmare49 I'm sending a feedback proposal that includes added bust size and a human form that shows more skin.

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 This is a prototype version of the changes I'd like to see on Aria. Give me another week, and I can finish it all up for you. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1U8ZfgRYA2aHkk3dle8VsgtbBaMG1IqDl/view?usp=sharing