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Ok the first four page has been sketch. Want to try something more light hearted.

Well you guy know the drill if you want to help with any mistake on dialouge feel free to post it on the comment. Any suggestion are welcome.

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Wayne Chen

比想象的快多了 wonderful!very great picture.

StarGazer

It’s already looking amazing. I can message you on discord to help with the spelling if you want?

ElSalsaRey

Very amusing!

Evan Lee

I have a question. Isn't it sequels of your previous liliraune comic?

Evan Lee

So, two liliraune that before you drawn isn't appear this comic?

Asani

"dis gon b gud" :unfolds a chair:

John Hynden

Please, let them be good and not evil !!

M1yago

Oh wow,, I already like this a lot. It's rare that there is so much dialogue

M1yago

Is the part of it poking deep at her feet the plant fusing with her already? 🤔

Anonymous

Verry nice start. Really looking forward to this one!

TheMotionHero

I hope this actually goes deeper into the Liliraune lore. I love how this is so far!

D Banks

I love the sign

RedeemerofDark

Shouldn't the face in the final panel on page four be different from the one before it? If your gonna do that with the line art then nevermind. "Gambling Addicted" seems a bit awkward, you could try "Rampant Gambler" might sound better in that part under the cold acting girl's name.

Asani

I do too, but what about Stay The Fuck Out?

Arbiter

I can see a few spelling and gramatical errors but I see you already have had a few offers to help correct that. Gambling Addict and Dumb as a Rock, I look forward to seeing how this turns out :)

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 I can't believe we're making someone more useless than Aqua from KonoSuba!