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Here are the sketch of the first three page.

 The text are still work in progress so I apologize for grammar.

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Roxanne Giling

Liking where this is going :D

Gustavo Tani

Nice, what if one of her lines is "Dont forget...there must always be a demon lord" or something to that effect

RedeemerofDark

Honestly the grammar appears to be fine, in reality you only appear to have missed words not used them incorrectly.

RedeemerofDark

Also this will be a interesting to test the companions loyalty~ Are the party members of the hero willing to go down him if it means continuing to be by the hero's side? Will they start wildly attacking him revealing how monstrous their monster hatred is that they would hurt their friend without hesitation if they showed signs of corruption? Or...will they run away...attempt to find a cute and or just try and save themselves? Personally I feel like the healer would understand what's happening but continue to want to be at the hero's side through all of this~ It'd be really interesting if that were the case~ Have that happen then in the second part of the comic they would double team the third member of their party~