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*~: Constructive Feedback ~:* (Patreon)

Published:
2021-01-12 04:55:45
Imported:
2021-01

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Salutations Sleep Demons,

I’m so proud of myself for how my first video came out! I really loved the red hues and warm feel. However, I’m still improving my skills and highly appreciate constructive criticism. How did the audio sound? Did you enjoy the elements or was it jarring? What other triggers should I consider including? How were the visuals? Was the crisp frame better than a processed, hazy one? How was the lighting? Any other pieces of feedback is welcomed~~

Sincerely,

Angelica

Comments

Anonymous

sounds of the birds haunts me to this very day. heh heh heh.

Anonymous

I took a break to watch and listen and will have to watch again before bed. I want this character to be my eccentic and rambly yet wise tia and the happy coincidental connection between the first and last card was so satisfying! Anyway~ I think in the beginning the audio was a bit too echoey, specifically at the beginning but later on in the video it was far less noticeable. This is definitely subjective but for me it was just way too bright to watch to get to sleep at night, with my lights off I had to lower my brightness. I think the warmth can be achieved still with lower light, maybe covering windows (looked like you were using daylight?) and lighting some candles or moving your warm bulbs just a bit closer under lower light would help make it more watchable for night-time viewers. The geese scared the heck out of me but you played it off very well with tingles so it wasn't too upsetting! I will say I was expecting the video to be a little bit more historical like your previous series like this, new direction? It's not necessarily a bad one! There was plenty to like as well, the set pieces and red ambient light set the mood perfectly. Though I think the video in general was a bit too bright, the warm ambient light was great! The triggers were really good too. The hand movements, fluttering, jewelry sounds, sprinkled spanish, and the candles clanking together at the end were super tingly though I could see the last being too jarring for a lot of people I love clinky sounds. Also the candles being chided made me giggle! Random side notes: - Immersion breaking earbuds hehe - Though the sound was cut out, we can still see the cut clap at about 32:09, it's a small thing but I thought I'd mention it just in case you didn't notice. It's more of an immersion thing than anything else since the clap is inaudible! - Pan shots at the beginning were pretty unsteady, I don't know much about camera work and how to make shots like that more stable, maybe someone else here has tips? This is kind of a superficial throwaway con since it doesn't necessarily affect the ASMR and was only brief. I hope this helps and was balanced enough criticism! Nothing's perfect but it was still really good and I know you'll just keep getting better. Sorry for the novel of a comment, I tend to do that haha.

Anonymous

Oops I posted my feedback on the "Early Access" page.

Anonymous

My first suggestion would be to install sound pads, I don't know if you already have some, but outside noise can really be a distraction; & something that's been in your videos since the dawn of time, so I don't mind, but the computer fan is something you should consider muffling also, it's not really a priority though (I'm sure a lot of people find that sound relaxing, as do I [you could try adding music like other role playing asmrtists, to try & mask the sound]). As for visuals, I can't note anything off, but I do agree with Lynn on the lighting; there wasn't much off on the video, I enjoyed it.

Anonymous

I agree try to install soundpads