Siudmak's Atreides+ English corrections of BTD (Patreon)

Hello!
This month, I made a patreon  play the game to find mistakes. He did some proofreading in the past, if I understood well.  He has found near 10 pages of mistakes (don't worry, he was rewarded). Thank you again, Hamlet!

He used this kind of version where you can read all the comments of the characters at the same time. I share it with you because you could find that version funny.
Also, if you find a big mistake, don't hesitate to leave a message or comment about it. In a few days, I will do an ultimate check.

The model for that draw is here.