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Hey everyone!

I've just finished the next chapter. I really hope you enjoy it.

The battle will continue over at least one more chapter after this (168). I've sketched out all the upcoming combat scenes, and there's enough going on for it to probably go on into chapter 169 as well. Just my notes for the battle scenes is currently 4k words. :)

Anyway, let me know if you spot any typos or continuity errors and I'll try to fix them asap.

Best wishes,

Tefler

Comments

AzureReader

How many quantum flux cannons does a dreadnought have? If they are facing the planet so they can shoot the quantum flux cannons on the ground shouldn’t the cannons on the ground be taking out some of the ones on the dreadnought? So far the only damage has been ‘hull breaches and subsystems’. Engines and weapons next round? Also, Calara was concerned the Invictus couldn’t attack while the dreadnought’s shields were up. They are down now and it seems like every weapon on the dreadnought would be vulnerable to getting picked off by someone who never misses in a fully shielded ship nearly impossible to hit.

Michael56Smith

.144: ,,, there are six (6) forward facing Quantum Flux Cannons on a Dreadnaught, ... -- So, you think Calara might just blast the heck out of Gally's Dreadnaught? -- I can scarcely wait for chapter #168, and more of the battle, ... this one is even better than the Battle for Terra found in chapter #100, ... ;-) ttfn

Walter Davis

Holy crap!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!! Take my money and hurry up!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣. Please take care of yourself and your family!!

Michael56Smith

.147: hey Tef, here's another oops for you to fix: "Dana waited for a long moment, but there was no reply from Alyssa. She knew the blonde had a lot on her place with Edraele out of action, ..." the word place s/b plate, right, ... this was almost at the chapters end, ... ;-) ttfn