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You can change the story! (Patreon)

Published:
2020-02-27 10:55:45
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2020-09

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I wanna make really short announcement about Swinging Island 2.

I'm still in the process of scriptwriting and basically, I'm doing page after page almost without proper scenario. What it means to you? It means, you have a great chance to influence the story right now! For example, one guy wrote me a comment that "....[something]... would be nice/funny to happen next" and I thought, that it's a great idea and I made it into the script! And this book will be published and translated to many languages (like the first one).. and it means, that your idea will stay forever in the erotic comics history. Isn't it amazing?

So, I want to encourage you to write your ideas and thoughts about my comics in the comments! And I'll include best ideas in the story! Thanks!

P.S.: I write this not for any commercial purposes, but for the sake of great story only!

Comments

Anonymous

I think it would be amazing if you added a scene within a sauna. I can see Grant just enjoying the heat when Lita walks by the room and sees him sitting there through the glass window. She then grins. Before the next panel shows Grant dozing off. He hears the words "Hello there" (a call back to when Rita first met Grant). He opens one eye and sees Lita standing there, her hand on her hip, smiling. She then asks "Mind if I join you?". Grant nervously says "O-of course". Lita sits down and ask Grant how he's enjoying the resort, and if he's had sex with anyone besides Betty. After Grant answers, she fans her face and says "It's getting quite steamy in here" and removes her towel. She notices Grant staring, looking up her luscious tan legs up her perfect body. Lita teases Grant, mentioning how she noticed him staring when he first arrived at the resort. She asks Grant if he would like to have a little fun, to which he nervously agrees. Lita locks the door to the sauna room and begins kissing Grant. She comments on how good of a kisser he is. She says "Are you going to join me?", indicating Grant should take off his towel. He takes off his towel and exposes his dick to Lita, who compliments him on the size of his cock (optionally add "For a Gringo". Lol). She gives Grant a blowjob, also licks on his balls while jerking him off, and lets Grant breastfuck her. After cuming in Lita's mouth (or on Lita's face), She sits down on the bench in the sauna room and spreads her legs. She says "My sister told me how you fucked her good and hard... now I want you to fuck me good and hard". It's here where Lita lies down on the bench (or on the floor) and Grant climbs on top of her. He puts his dick in and fucks Lita, thrusting in and out. Lita moans from Grant's dick, all while the steam spreads throughout the room. They both orgasm from the sex, with Grant coming all over Lita's tits and stomach. Grant takes a minute to regain his breath, telling Lita "That was amazing". She tells him "We're not done yet". She bends over, putting her hands on the sides of the door and exposing her ass to Grant. She looks back seductively and says "Come and fuck my ass, just like you did Rita's". Grant positions himself behind, grabbing her hips, before he puts it in Lita's butt. Lita's moans as Grant continues to fuck her ass. While they're having anal sex Lita says between her moans "Rita... wasn't kidding... your cock... is amazing!". Lita's orgasms from Grant fucking her ass (You could even have a panel of her hand sliding down the doors steamy window, Titanic style) Grant then tells Lita he's about to cum, where she responds "Cum in my ass Grant!". It's then that Grant erupts and cums deep in Lita's ass. Giving them both immense pleasure. You could optionally have Lita cumfart too. Grant pulls out and sits down on the sauna bench. Lita grabs her towel saying "That was great... we should do it again some time." Before wrapping herself up. She tells Grant "Tell your beautiful girlfriend I said hello", before unlocking and walking out the door. Grant, breathing in and out, leans his head back and smiles. And scene. Hope you enjoy that. Feel free to add or trim it if you decide to use it. I also wouldn't be opposed to Lita squirting during any of her orgasms. Also keep in mind any characters can be used there, I just used Grant and Lita cause I think it would make for some great dialogue (And I wanna see them have sex lol) I'll comment here if I have any more ideas for scenes!

Mcbieghn

So after a few days of fun between Betty, Lita and Grant; Rita and Ricko arrive (I liked Dalton Remy's idea as one of their escapades). The gang decides to dress up for an evening at the club to reacquaint themselves before trying out some of the other resort offerings with each other.

Mcbieghn

The Girls go to Betty's room to prepare. As they are drying each other after a shared shower they start looking at each other and a three way lesbian fest ensues. The boys are waiting at the club, realize something must be going on to delay the girls and go look into Betty's room window. When they see the boys at the window the girls really put on a show for them as the men masturbate. As a climax to the evening the men go into the room and spray all over the exhausted ladies.

Anonymous

Привет Андрей! Пишу на русском потому что грамматика английского меня подводит.))) Твоё предложение меня очень заинтересовало - стать соавтором комикса. Я конечно понимаю, что основная тема комикса - свободный секс. Однако, мне, а возможно что и другим читателям, было бы интересно посмотреть на что-то, чего ещё не было в первой части... Например, можно добавить в комикс сюжетную линию в формате БДСМ или других фетешей. У меня вот появилась такая идея: После того как Бетти и Грант вышли загорать, Бетти начала соблазнять Гранта у них происходит быстрый секс. Бетти остаётся не удовлетворенной,а Грант находит предлог, чтобы пройтись по территории. Оставшись одна Бетти засыпает. В таком виде её застает Рико или кто-то другой. Поглаживаниями он её будет, делает куннилингус и между ними начинается секс. В процессе секс прерывается на анальный фистинг, который делают Бетти, во время которого к паре Бетти и Рико (или кого-то другого) присоединяется пара мужчин-близнецов. Происходит двойное проникновение, жёсткое шлепанье Бетти и все трое кончают в рот Бетти. Близнецы уходят, Бетти остаётся с Рико (или кем-то, кто к ней подошёл первым). В это самое время Грант, уйдя от Бетти встречает Литу и Риту, которые уже занимаются сексом с двумя белыми мужчинами. Увидев Гранта они зовут его присоединиться к ним. Грант соглашается. Лита и Рита одновременно делают Гранту минет, в то время пока их имеют двое мужчин с которыми они были (или в позиции сзади, или же женщины в позиции наездниц), при этом они чередуют вагинальный и анальный секс (или кто-то один занимается вагинальным, а другой анальным сексом). Грант сменяет одного из мужчин, занимается вагинальным и анальным сексом с Ритой или Литой, затем переходит к другой девушке и делает тоже самое, при том мужчины организуют двойное проникновение в ту из девушек с которой Грант в данный момент не занимается сексом. Грант во время секса наматывает волосы девушек на руку, сжимает груди и соски девушек. Мужчины кончив на тело девушек уходят, оставляя Гранта с Литой и Ритой одних. Грант кончает им обеим в рот и на лицо. Девушки идут в душ, обустроенный на территории рядом с тем местом где они занимались сексом с Грантом, чтобы смыть сперму. Во время принятия душа девушки начинают заниматься сексом между собой и доводят себя до оргазма. Грант предлагает им показать то чему он научился. Девушки соглашаются и Грант доводит их до важного оргазма (девушки сквиртуют). После этого все трое возвращаются к Бетти и Рико. Дальше происходит секс между Бетти с Грантом и Литы, Риты с Рико на виду у всех, т. к к тому времени многие уже проснулись. После секса они договариваются о совместном ужине. КОНЕЦ.

Anonymous

Ууу, а в конце комикса все отправятся в космос )) покорять вселенную. Интересно. А некоторые делают затравки в конце страницы, мол нужно предложить варианты действий или же выбрать из твоих вариантов.

Anonymous

Hot tub type moment. Have Betty and Grant surrounded by guys of all different cock sizes, colours, cut and uncut and she ends up having them all sit on the edge of the tub and she samples them all and is very vocal in telling Grant how they all feel different in her hand and mouth etc. A wife ( bring in a new woman with a different physical appearance ) notices poor Grant sat spellbound slowly stroking himself and offers to help him out whilst his wife is occupied. Betty pushes her limits with deciding where all these guys should cum on/in her.

tarusov
>>32981583

Thanks a lot for the long comment! I'll definitely use something out of it. I like your ideas and description. Thanks again!

Michele Castelnovi

It would be nice if Betty and Grant met a couple of girls sunbathing naked, wearing sunglasses: a redhair with freckles and very long hair, and a black one with short hair. Grant would be very embarrassed but obviously excited, and Betty would laugh with joy. The two girls welcome them smiling, and tease him, who is more and more embarrassed. One asks nicely if he can bring them a cocktail from the bar, he comes and goes with the tray, but when he comes back he finds the three girls kissing. It would be nice if their friends invited them to a fancy evening at the club. Obviously, it's a theme night, in costume: for the girls, long dresses with cleavage and split thigh, Belle Epoque style, with necklaces and ostrich feathers above the hair (but no lingerie) and high heels; cigarettes with a long ivory mouthpiece and champagne rose goblets; the boys, instead, naked. They invite him to waltz with them, but he is very embarrassed because of his excitement. The girls make a bet and one of them loses, so the next night he has to pay a penance. A Lost Bet. It would be nice if the two girlfriends invited them the next night to pay the bet that one girl has lost (which girl has lost? Take your pick, however you like… the redhead?). The penance consists in serving the other two girls dressed as French Maid - well, dressed doesn't make the idea, the French Maid costume leaves the nipples and the whole butt uncovered, above the stockings and heels. He, unfortunately, has to accompany her, dressed as a Butler, with the jacket and tie (only he doesn't wear trousers). The two girls who won the bet order him to do some things (like dusting the furniture, serving cocktails on the tray, etc.) then the more sarcastic one gets the idea to order the French Maid and the Butler to kiss and have sex while the other two watch them. On horseback. I know it's very hard to draw a horse but Betty would be perfect to ride naked by the sea. Grant follows her slowly on foot carrying the picnic basket. Once there, she still wants to ride, and she rides him.

Michele Castelnovi

The (Soft) Leash. Betty teases Grant, because Tuesday will be the “Leash Day”: as a joke, without any particular humiliation or pain, each person in love will wear a collar (and nothing else) and will obey the orders given by the person holding the leash. Betty asks Grant if he will ever have the courage to do so, he blushes and says nothing, but on Tuesday morning he wakes her up by bringing her breakfast in bed and already wearing the collar with the leash. She smiles with joy, rejoices, enjoys her breakfast (oh yes), then goes out on the beach because it's Tuesday and there are many couples, where one of the two (male or female) holds the other (male or female). They meet Lita, who keeps a person on a leash... Lita explains to Betty that the person will have to obey "whoever keeps the leash", which could also change during the day: for example, you see, Betty, if you give me Grant's leash, he will have to obey me... "WHAAAAT????". "Yes of course, dear..." Jewelry. Elegant evening at the Club, dedicated to the theme "Jewels". Grant and all the men in tuxedos. The girls (and in particular Betty, the redhead and the black one I was talking about) naked, but wearing a lot of jewels: necklaces, rings, earrings, nipple and clitoris piercings (for Betty they should be "temporary" type piercings: but it's possible that the redhead has real piercings). The girls dance wildly to get men excited, but instead they sip their cocktails talking about football and sports. It will end up that to attract the attention of the boys, the girls start pretending to kiss each other, then they really kiss, then besides kissing... Too much sun. Unfortunately, the blonde Betty is not used to the sun and she got burned (as I have seen many Russians do in Tossa de Mar, near Barcelona). Her skin is irritated and Grant has to put the cream on her with all possible care and delicacy. She complains for every touch of her hands because her skin is reddened, but when he puts the cream between her legs, Betty starts moaning for another reason....

Michele Castelnovi

Dear Andrew, the first drawings of yours I noticed were the girls of Sports (Archery, Soccer...) and this Pleasure Land is after all a tourist village, right? Maybe you can take back your drawings of sports girls: horse riding, archery, fencing... For example: The Archery Competition. The girls (Betty, the Redhead and the Black One) are standing naked in a row, each with a bow and a glove that repairs the arm. They seem very focused on the target: one bites her lower lip, one takes aim... but Grant moves a remote control and all three laugh. What's going on? Each one has a remote-controlled remote vibrator inside, in front, and behind a jewel-shaped anal plug, each of a different colour. The archery contest is made difficult by the remote control that Grant can activate at any time. The girls laugh but sweat and are very excited, and can't hit the target. Until at least one of them reaches a hundred points, Grant will keep teasing them and it could be hours! The others fall to the ground, upset, but Betty decides to put in a lot of effort and focuses on the target, trying to ignore the vibrations that Grant gives them. After a few wrong shots, she finally hits a 30, then a 50, and they all cheer (but readers know that Grant let her win on purpose...).

Anonymous

Add some drama to it, SIp.1 was amazing but the acceptance of the swing was too easy. In a more crowded environment things can get heat pretty fast. Let’s say our couple starts something with another couple or maybe some girls playing with him, getting her jealous to the point that she leaves sad but saying to him is fine. She’s alone until Rita finally arrives in the time of her need, her old beach friend then takes her to watch him having his fun with the girls. Both talking about how much pleasure he’s having and get in making him finish more than previous times. In the middle of the night Rita’s sister starts to loudly moan through the walls and gets their attention, she’s at the red room with Rico and 6 or more guys doing all her roles at once. He goes to the room next door and see her, comes back to get his wife to watch it too. She starts to get wet, and more excited; The men notice her watching and smile to her as invitation. She gets carried away and starts asking to be treated like a bad girl so her husband can watch. They make her cum multiple times until she’s almost at breaking point. After all the sex they go to dance at the pool party, hot people, normal people, everyone is having some fun. Everything is permitted. They get so horny that they fuck only each other in front of everyone, he’s shy. But he gives her the best time of her life. Even better than her recent gangbang. They meet Rita and say goodbye.

Anonymous

If there is 120 pages I’m not bothered.. add drama... add normal human being feelings... conflict... make it more real...

Anonymous

I mentioned this a while back. I’d enjoy there being a yoga instructor. Maybe an artsy hippie type. The instructor notices that Grant is struggling to not be aroused. She goes out of her way to tease him with sexy poses until finally fucking him in some very flexible positions.

Anonymous

Might be nice to see Pleasure Island merge with Kinky Cards a little. Betty, Lita and Rita in a bondage dungeon, especially with Betty and Grant as a newbies.