Avatar 18+ Unfinished script (Patreon)

When i make my comics I start with a super loose outline of a script. Much of the dialogue during this pass is a placeholder, and once i arrive to that page i frequently rewrite to improve the flow. The version of the script you’re reading has been annotated to add clarity 

(Characters, K - Katara, So - Sokka, Z - Zuko, Az - Azula, Ty - Ty Lee, T - Toph, A - Aang, M - Mai)

*Katara and Azula sex scene*

K: Dont leave, I promise I’ll be back. And when I do I will have taken care of everything, you just need to trust me

K: They’re going to forgive you

*katara leaves azula in the beach house*

Scene 6 - Beach evening

*Katara racing to her destination, Sokka’s award ceremony, everyone is there*

So: And there we were, surrounded by angry spirits on all sides. It all seemed over for us until I realized the badgermoles were freed from their cages…

K: Zuko! I need you to come with me!! Mai and Ty Lee too,

Z: Now? The governor is ready to start

Mayor’s Wife: We’re about to award the medal of champions

K: I’ll explain on the way but first I need a promise from all of you to not lose your cool

So: Katara none of this is making any sense

K: Ughh, just get moving and I’ll - I’ll

*katara spots a hooded figure navigating away in the crowd, it is Azula*

K: Motherfucker!

*katara chases azula down, blowing her cover. Azula reveals herself by thowing fire back*

Az: Stay back!

Z: Azula

Gov: She’s supposed to be in prison! Sokka, I need your assistance

* The crowd is in a panic*

K: No!!

So: Suki, grab my cape! This is a job for TEAM AVATAR

Ty: Wait, sokka. Idk if i can actually fight azula, is that ok?

So: Thats ok Ty Lee you sit this one out, Suki, Toph, let’s go!

T: Finally some action

*Team Avatar rushes towards Azula in an epic fashion, katara blocks them with a shield of ice while Azula runs away*

Z: What are you doing! She’s getting away!

K: I’m not going to let you hurt her

So: Sorry sis, its the governor’s orders

*sokka runs past katara*

*big fight scene, azula v everyone rushing her, katara trying to stop/slow them down, she freezes sokka, suki, mai, toph?*

*aang flies down, real angry*

Z: Why are you helping her??

K: She’s not a threat you just have to let her go (to zuko)

A: So NOW we’re letting things go

*katara aang fight for real, super cool water effects. They are yelling at each other while bending everything they have*

K: Why is it so hard to admit you were wrong!

A: I know I was wrong, when did I ever say otherwise!

K: it would be nice to hear you say it!

A: *Reluctantly* Katara Im sorry! Ive always been sorry, thats why I had to leave for so long I was so ashamed.

K: Thats not the first time you’ve disappeared when things got tough

A: I know i do that alot, dont rub it in!! And it doesnt justify you bloodbending me either

K: I know i know, that was me being stupid. Revenge is stupid.

K: But thanks … you have someone else you need to forgive to

A: I do? *aang looks towards everyone else fighting with azula* Do i haaaaaave to

*katara glaring*

A: Fine, but im doing it for you

*they kiss, aang flies off*

*azula and zuko are fighting, aang comes out of the sky to break it up with airbending*

A: STOOOOPP!!

*the fighting stops*

A: You arent going to hurt us Azula, are you

Z: ‘Not going to hurt us??’ She just threw a fireball at my head!

Az: Only because she threw a wall at me! *directed at toph*

A: Enough! Azula, you cant keep running. Not from everyone you know

*Ty lee breaks the tension by embracing her friend*

Ty: Azula! I never thought i’d see you again!

M: Hey azula (nonchalantly)

Az: Hey Mai

K: Azula doesnt have anywhere to go, and what she needs right now is a family. One that wont attack her, or get revenge. The cycle of fucking each other up ends here

So: Alright team avatar, let down your weapons.

Mayor: WHAT, you arent going to arrest this maniac? She needs to be brought to justice!

So: If its all the same to you, I think she is going to be staying with us for a while

Mayor: In that case, you have betrayed your solemn oath to protect the people of Ember Island and will NOT be awarded the medal of champions. Come dear

Mayor’s Wife: Goodbye, Sokka

So: (To Zuko) This would be a really bad time to tell him I fucked his wife, huh

Scene 7 - Beach house night

*Everyone is fucking each other in the beach house, Aang and Katara are not there*

(Come up with some hot/funny material)

*Aang and Katara on the balcony*

K: Hey

A: So does this mean everything is all back to normal?

K: As ‘normal’ as they can be, we werent all quite this horny back in the day, right?

A: I think time apart might explain it

K: Right, what has it been, 3 years?

A: Feels like 100

K: I missed you

*fuck around a little until Katara stops*

K: So, you know … theres no reason why this ‘thing’ needs to be exclusive. If you wanted to sleep around or

A: Or you want to sleep around?

K: I like to keep my options open

A: We can make that work

*Pull out to the gaang, all mingling and fucking around*