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Time passed swiftly within Nevermore as the final sprint to complete as many floors as possible to rake up all the points possible continued. The gods naturally got more active as they monitored all the important groups as the end gradually approached. As of the final ten years, there had been approximately a few hundred individuals who were fighting for the top spots of the Leaderboards, with this number only decreasing as the months went by.

The gods chilling in the streaming room couldn’t hold themselves back from commenting on all the developments, especially when they viewed the ones associated with their own factions. Yet, one person kept being brought up, not just because of himself, but the party he had. It was rare to see a single group with close relations to four Primordials after all, and with Valdemar getting quite invested, too, the demand for Jake clips was through the roof.

“You still aren’t sad Jake didn’t want a skill based on your Records?” Minaga asked as they had just gotten done watching a highlight from a fight Jake and his party had. “I think he and that Runemaiden of yours could make a good team if you brought him to your side. One wielding a bow with devastating arrows in the back while the other keeps the foe at bay while being nearly impervious to damage…”

They all knew Jake had rejected a skill related to Valdemar. Not because they knew what kind of skill had been offered but because they knew he had to have been offered one. The Primordials were the gods that had been around the longest and knew the most about the system, so for them to deduce Jake would have to be offered some skill because of his clash with Valdemar was only to be expected.

“Heh, if it didn’t suit his Path, it didn’t suit his Path,” Valdemar shrugged. “Isn’t it only more exciting that he rejected me? Actually, isn’t it better? For someone powerful like him to join Valhal while not really having any skills from Valhal will only expand our Legacies! Gudrun is gonna be more than on board to recruit him.”

“Openly talking about stealing someone’s Chosen isn’t proper etiquette, now is it?” the Holy Mother chimed in, in a more playful than scolding tone.

“Bah, Jake is his own person; he can do whatever he wants,” Valdemar waved her off. “I’ll just make sure we give him the best offer to join us. I might even throw in a case of my personal brew to really convince him.”

“That one’s gonna be tough,” Minaga said, shaking his head. “The Endless Empire is already willing to- no, wait, never mind. That was confidential. Ignore that I said anything; the source is unreliable anyway, and I’ve never even met the guy in person. What I am saying is, if Jake ever shows himself open to recruitment, there’s gonna be competition.”

Vilastromoz had remained quiet as he finally joined the conversation. “You talk as if you stand a chance… don’t you think his current Patron may have something to say?”

“Sure he might,” Valdemar grinned as he leaned forward. “But if he can hold onto my fellow human is entirely dependent on if he’s powerful enough to, now isn’t it?”

Valdemar and Vilastromoz both spiked their auras for a moment as the Wyrmgod interfered instantly. His own presence washed over theirs before they could cause too much of a ruckus. It pushed both of theirs back, suppressing them slightly with a clearly superior aura.

“Behave when you are in my domain,” the Wyrmgod said with a sigh.

Vilastromoz and Valdemar both did as told while the human Primordial muttered, dissatisfied. No matter how powerful they were, they were still within the domain of the Wyrmgod. In Nevermore, he was the most powerful being beside the Bound God of the World Wonder itself. Considering the limitations of Nevermore and the contract that the Primordial and she had made, the Wyrmgod was definitely the one most able to use his powers of the two.

That was obviously part of the reason no one had shown up with their real bodies. Now, chances are they would be able to escape Nevermore if they were truly there and got into a conflict with the Wyrmgod, but it certainly wouldn’t come cheap, not even for Valdemar.

The mood had turned a bit sour, but an unexpected savior of the vibe entered.

“It’s almost disgustingly simplistic,” the Blightfather commented as he studied a clip of Jake slaying a mini-boss on floor seventy-eight with a single arrow as he expertly changed the subject. Quite easily so, as he hadn’t really been paying much attention to the bickering. “The hunter’s Path, that is. There are certainly many complicated concepts infused into his blows, but all the applications are so minimalistic in execution. Complexities are sheared away for pure useability when he fights. There is little thought, yet his actions are rarely ever something that could be considered questionable. I understand it when Minaga described him as a natural fighter indeed, his adaptability when facing any opponent is remarkable.”

“Don’t tell me you are also trying to steal another Primordial’s Chosen?” the Holy Mother asked him. “It shouldn’t surprise me, yet I still find myself disappointed.”

“I never said I wanted to recruit him. One can admire something impressive without coveting it, a concept I understand you find difficult to comprehend,” the Blightfather shook his head. “Besides, even if I did want him to join the Risen, I am uncertain how well his Path would mix with changing his race, especially as I sense his soul is altered, likely by a skill of some kind. His Bloodline certainly also complicates things. No, I wouldn’t want him to be one of the Risen, but I would certainly welcome him to come for a visit. Perhaps to see an old friend of his.”

Vilastromoz wasn’t surprised the Blightfather had already seen through some aspects of Jake’s soul, even the part where his Truesoul had slightly changed when he got the Anomalous Soul skill. The Viper had few he would say could match him when it came to the study of the soul, but the Blightfather was definitely one of them. If not, he wouldn’t have been able to create a race like the Risen and the entire ecosystem required for this new undead race to not only survive but thrive.

“Speaking of old friends, how is that cursed trapper Jake knows doing?” Vilastromoz asked.

“Adequately. Better than I expected, honestly. Which perhaps shouldn’t be that surprising considering his talent in dungeon engineering. The knowledge he had before the initiation has led to some interesting insights those who were born into the system simply cannot possess due to the fundamental change in natural laws,” the Blightfather responded. “Not that he is a contender for any Leaderboards. But he is worth nurturing, I guess, if for nothing else but because of his connection to your Chosen.”

“Hey, Casper is a great guy all on his own, and I will hear nothing to the contrary,” Minaga cut in as he crossed his arms.

“I never said he wasn’t,” the Risen Primordial said as he changed the topic slightly once more as he glanced at the Wyrmgod. “Now, how are those Void God fanatics doing? Are they a threat to the Leaderboards?”

“You know I am not going to share any details,” the Wyrmgod shook his head. “But if you are asking if I expect to see any beings with close connections to the Void Gods on top of the Leaderboards, I would have to say no.”

“A bit disappointing,” the Viper added with a sigh. “I thought we could have a first.”

“The Path related to the void is simply too limiting in nature,” the Wyrmgod shook his head.

It was a bit like with Unique Lifeforms. Being someone using void energy limited you to only having void energy, as it simply consumed every other trace of energy within the body. This meant there were many things one couldn’t do that could make some floors or Challenge Dungeons harder than usual, much like the Unique Lifeforms, who also had very limited Paths. This was also why Unique Lifeform barely ever placed top ten on the Leaderboards despite their many innate advantages as pinnacle beings of the multiverse.

“Any news from the Dao Sect who has the Chosen of the Lifesoul Daolord participating?” Nature’s Attendant finally also asked, the man rarely speaking. He just focused on making sure Artemis wasn’t overwhelmed while being forced to be in the presence of the five Primordials, who sometimes got into arguments and flared their auras. Most of his time outside of that was spent watching Dina and her adventures, along with some other promising groups from the Pantheon of Life.

The fact he was interested in the Bloodline Patriarch from Earth didn’t surprise Vilastromoz either. The man was an absolute anomaly with magic clearly based on his Bloodline, making it almost transcendent in nature. The sheer absurdity of his existence simply went a bit under the radar due to the other overshadowing anomaly from the same homeworld.

As someone using life magic, it only made sense the Pantheon of Life was interested in what he did, even if the Viper knew Nature’s Attendant wasn’t a big fan of the C-grade. Because what he did was far from something that followed the natural order.

“While the Chosen of the Daolord isn’t a contender for the Leaderboards, a party member of his is,” the Wyrmgod answered. “She is the disciple of the Heartsoul Daolord, and while she only carries a Divine Blessing, chances are big she will be made a Chosen when she reaches A or maybe even B-grade.”

They proceeded to discuss a few more candidates. Some of whom had only really made themselves known during the Challenge Dungeon period and truly grown into their power over the last decade. The multiverse was a big place with no lack of talent. Some young, promising geniuses from the United Tribes proved themselves, others from the demon factions showed their skills, as well as people from many different powerful factions. Not to mention those who were just personal disciples of powerful beings in the multiverse or standalone talents, many of whom none of them knew of before Nevermore, despite every Primordial faction’s extensive information network.

Some geniuses were also looked at and then forgotten if they disappointed expectations. Others were just somewhere in the middle where the gods could look at them, nod in unison, agreeing they were talented and had a good chance to reach a high grade, and then move on without thinking about that person again. People like Draskil fell into this camp, as well as, quite frankly, ninety-nine point nine percent of the geniuses of the many factions. Because here, towards the end, they only focused on those at the very top who truly stood a chance to grab a top spot on the Leaderboards.

Yet even as all the promising young talents showed themselves, and no matter how many rising stars proved their worth, two names were always mentioned. Two geniuses from the new universe who had already proven themselves as apex beings of this generation, both Chosen of gods recognized as also standing at the pinnacle.

It was naturally Jake Thayne, the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, and Ell’Hakan, Chosen of Yip of Yore. These were the two people the gods were in agreement would more likely than not claim first and second… the only question is who would take the number one slot… and how their presence would shake up the All-Time Leaderboards.

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While many competed for the top spots on the Nevermore Leaderboards, one must remember that the vast majority of those who did the World Wonder had nothing to do with this competition. There were many limitations as to who could compete on the Leaderboards, and most – especially those who knew it wasn’t like they were competing with the top geniuses –just ignored that entire feature.

Instead, they used Nevermore for all its other merits. They used it for the same reason nearly everyone went back to Nevermore in all grades and even into godhood: it was simply one of the best leveling spots in the entire multiverse.

Dungeons, in general, were borderline a requirement to facilitate progress. The natural ecosystem of planets couldn’t support the growth of everyone at once, especially not when more powerful beings appeared. A single monster going from C to B-grade would lead to the deaths of numerous roughly equally leveled creatures. This was obviously unsustainable, which was why a proper source of creatures to fight was required… which was where dungeons came in.

A single dungeon could be used over and over again to progress, removing the need to hunt other forms of life, thus preserving the planet at least a little bit.

This naturally became less of a problem when one reached higher grades and could explore space. Based on estimates, less than a thousand-in-one planets were fully integrated into the wider social system of the multiverse but were just planets that had never truly made contact with any other factions or perhaps just ones filled with monsters who never developed sapience.

Even more planets were just empty, save for elementals who spawned simply due to the mana density. These areas of “wilderness” in space were great hunting spots, even if they did have the challenge of powerful foes often being few and far between, a problem dungeons didn’t tend to have. So, dungeons were still a better option.

And ultimately, Nevermore was just the biggest dungeon in the entire multiverse. It was somewhere people just went to get levels, and with the special time dilation of the World Wonder that didn’t result in a negative impact on Records, the place just got even better.

On top of that, Nevermore as a World Wonder had special titles associated with it. This was outside the Leaderboards and Challenge Dungeon ones – as one had to remember both those things were only available to C-grades and weren’t present in later versions of Nevermore.

Outside of these special C-grade titles, everyone would gain a title just based on floors cleared and overall performance, granting Records as well as sometimes even a few stats. Most people did it for the Records, though, as the stats were often inconsequential.

One such person who was just in Nevermore for the levels was Miranda. She wasn’t someone who cared much about the fifty-year limit or trying to optimize how many floors she could clear. She was just there for the experience and nothing else. If possible, she didn’t even want to engage with anything that had to do with the Leaderboards and Jake because, as she put it… this was her only damn holiday in years.

The group the Court Witch had gone with wasn’t what one expected, though. She had ended up going with some individuals from the Order of the Malefic Viper to get a good party going and also because she wanted to disconnect a bit from her usual daily life. She wanted to fully dedicate herself to her Path as a witch, at least for a little while. Besides, it wasn’t as if her decision to not go with other people from Earth was out of the ordinary.

Sultan had teamed up with a group of mercenaries working for the Golden Road Emporium, who were pretty much hired to help him gain more levels than he usually would. Based on what the merchant had said, this was apparently partly a reward for his great performance in preparations for Jake’s Chosen Ceremony.

Many other groups from Earth had also teamed up with people outside of the planet. Needless to say, quite a few also teamed up with fellow Earthlings or some of the newly integrated slaves. Earth as a whole was getting a huge power-up during this period in preparation for the Prima Guardian, as quite a big portion of Earth’s C-grades had gone.

As mentioned, none of these people were there to compete on any Leaderboards. They were not there to engage in the competition… yet many still paid attention to the Leaderboards. Not to see their own names anywhere but with hope and expectations of seeing their World Leader’s there.

Comments

BumAssBumAss

Thanks for the chapter

Xavier Belmont

Thank you for the chapter.

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter

edgardo rossi

Thanks for the chapter

Anonymous

Thanks

CinnamonHawk263

Is that the light at the end of the tunnel I see, I enjoyed this arc but holy shit was it long.

Lori

More please….

Gavin

Wow finally coming to the end of nevermore. Whew it's been a ride that I've mostly enjoyed. Jake reAlly leveled up a lot here qualitatively especially and watching him bitch slap yips chosen will be almost sexually gratifying

Moosh

Glorious

Ben Sheahan

We’re almost there. Can’t wait to see the potential titles and stat gains.

Karim Saadi

Great interlude. Honestly, every chapter involving the godly viewing party is a personal nevermore highlight of mine.

Anonymous

Any news from the Dao Sect who has the Chosen of the Lifesoul Daolord participating This doesn't flow

Anonymous

Kind of excited to see never more come to a close, despite how good of an arc it has been. Now we’re left with a question of what comes first. The end of the dungeon, or the birth of a primal soulflame.

AA

How comes the Daolord didn't show up to the meeting?

Austin Barton

Okay I know this will probably never happen but when the blightfather talked about Jake one shoting the beast I thought what if he starts doing the same thing even into being a demigod or god. Like just imagining demigod Jake going from god domain to god domain trying to one shot a god before evolving to godhood.

Ty Cooper

Great chapter leading is to the end. I am already preparing for cliffhanger Fridays. It has the feels of a Monday release for the leaderboard final results. I am excited to see how Jake did on the all time leaderboard. I am curious as to how bad Jake will beat the cheeto though.

Anonymous

The anomalous soul skill I can’t remember which one it is. Does anyone remember?

Ryan Ulrich

Kinda shocked they are gonna say the Void team won’t be in the top 10. Kinda scratching my head on who’s gonna make the cut outside of Jake, EH and Ghost King. Not gonna lie, I care more about the 3-10 spots than 1+2 since they are a given

Mat

Should be Anomaly Soul of the Heretic-Chosen which permanently changed his soul

Ty Cooper

Right. I am looking forward to the all time leaderboard. Guessing Jake will rock that one also. Is he going to get the #1 all time or be 3 or 6 or something like that. I have a feeling that all the names that were mentioned for the multipliers after the challenge dungeons will be on there. I hope Arnold gets the 10th spot at least. Arnold is up there as one of my favorite side characters.

Matthew Avery

So, what all-star grade are we genuinly expecting? It isn't like this dungeon includes rankers like the primordials, since the owner most likely began the project when all of them were at the tail end of their mortal ranks. But generals, 2nd era gods and onwards could be contenders? With all the talk of billions, and trillions of people, and thinking of how many have competed in there it seems almost dumb to place him near the top. I know he is the protagonist and such, but Zog seems to keep us grounded at least a little. If two people are near the "best", just in this group I find it hard to believe Jake could get higher than a 100 ish ranking. I just genuinly struggle with not rolling my eyes and call bs, and special treatment if Jake drops a 1st place on his own, and nr.1 on the all-star. I mean, sure- interesting. But then what? He is on top? He is in C-grade, and he has always worked hardest when he sees someone in a temporarily higher spot than him? Maybe placing him like 112th and then having him write down all the names to seek them out and fight them on his journey to/through godhood? I'm interested to hear other opinions here. ❤

Ty Cooper

Yeah gives him lots of stuff. It forces Villy's records into Jake's poisons...... and that is all I can remember this early in the morning.

Michael

Boi are yip's plans constantly getting jostled around by Jake being jake

Ty Cooper

Apparently he is super elusive and his sect doesn't usually do the dungeon

Max

Hope Jake takes first.

Mat

A presentative of the Dao sects is part of the gods that come after the Primordials gathered

Ty Cooper

Yeah had a feeling the soulflame was not going to be ready in Nevermore. So that Jake can make the dragon flights help him with his soulflame.

Allan

Is it just me or is someone else waiting for the Artemis meeting after the Nevermore arc?

Ty Cooper

I am looking forward to Jake beating yip's c-grade leaderboard score showing he is better than yip and his chosen.

Namorat

I love chapters like this one a lot

Michael

I'm expected Jake to beat him too, but I'm curious if yip snuck a message to ell'hakan in nevermore trying to downplayed his performance to "let Jake win" that way their rivalry would grow or others looking to recruit Jake will vet more aggressive to get the Allstar of the 93rd universal

Max

Not just you I’m curious about it myself.

J Davis

There is a typo where Sultan is talked about. “Golden Road Imperium” Is supposed to be “Emporium”

Star

Thousand-in-one? Not one-in-thousand?

Sachieiel

Yeah, I agree it would be kind of bland for him to get the best score of all time. Beating EH and getting the title is enough progress and it would be more interesting for the all-time leaderboard to highlight that he isn't an unprecedented genius, there have been other more monstrous talents in previous eras.

Anonymous

You forget that records is what allows someone to progress their path and newly integrated worlds have the biggest sauce of records, also his bloodline is OP.

Jonathan

Well, we know this week's Friday cliffhanger now. "Jake looked up at the leaderboard to see his final point total and ranking, and saw...."

Mohammed Sheekh

everyone give your ratings for the nevermore arc, I will start. 6/10

Sam Rosenberg

The god interactions make this story so cool!

deus vault

how come so many planets aren't apart of the multiverse, where going to nevermore is offered to everyone?

jazz

Let’s goooo 👏🏾 6 more floors down. The end gotta be this week. Maybe a cliff Friday 🤔

Bent Sommer

It was stated that he didnt got the highest multiplier out of his Party....so i dont think he will be 10th spot- otherwise another from his Party would be higher

Anonymous

He’s doesn’t get out much. When Villy went on a rampage in the early eras, he was one of the few primordials who didn’t help stop him.

Bent Sommer

#1 jake #2 eh #3 Regal dragonflight #4 daemon prince #5 dao sect woman #6 ghost king ....

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Anonymous

He has a thoroughly rule bending bloodline and the more universes become part of the system the more records and the more powerful people get. I'm realistically expecting a record that doesn't get broken until the 100th or so universe with how much of an outlier Jake is but maybe in prior nevermores there were a select few that did slightly better

Numbzy

Honestly I have mostly enjoyed it. So solid 8.5/10.

Numbzy

It is always a treat. Honestly I will miss these once Jake leaves Nevermore.

Max

Wonder what minaga knows. What the endless empire wants to offer, and who told him that he didn’t meet in person.

Isley

good chappie

Michael Fannon

Someone posted in an earlier chapter that nevermore is a little more than a fourth of all chapters so far.

Anonymous

They were talking about Eron for a bit without mentioning him by name saying he gets overshadowed by Jake but still has an incredible bloodline that Nature's Attendant is keeping an eye on

Michael Fannon

He doesn't do much outside. More surprised Aeon and Stormild haven't shown yet. I figured either Villy or Minaga would invite them for the ending if for no other reason than it would be fun to have so many primordials around to mess with evsryone else.

Anonymous

4/10 it had some great parts but it just stretched to long. I see my self skipping nevermore on rereads. And I see the series losing readers and fans because of it.

Anonymous

It's only long with 5 chapters released per week or we'd have all read it all and then some

Michael Fannon

There are still things out there to fight at that level besides gods. Like the void beasts.

JJB4345_80_815

He never met his own clone, because it's a clone of a clone probably. He loves pulling out that joke, usually denying culpability for stuff like invading a special dungeon (Holy Mother - more about the lack of promised restitution) or not paying up after a bet (Villy)...

Decibel790

Glad to see Miranda getting that much needed vacation, and a fun interlude for the story! Tftc!

Michael Fannon

Artemis meeting Jake? Or the jake support group? Cause sounds like she might need to be a member

Mat

Got interested in Miranda’s party members. Hope Meira is part of it

Michael Fannon

With Monday and tuesday being side chapters of people reacting but no scores, Wednesday on the lower scores. Thursday with a god perspective. And friday as a cliff right before revealing the top 2.

Michael Fannon

No idea on what the offer is. But the untrustworthy source that Minaga never met is another Minaga clone. Completely untrustworthy

Michael Fannon

So Miranda is on vaction. By going to a dungeon filled with danger, traps, and a increasingly friendly Minaga to relax. Yeah, that is going to be fun. Also, anyone else hoping that her party she picked up in the order includes Meira?

Zadumu

I think it would be kinda silly to arbitrarily have Jake do worse in all stars. I mean realistically it makes sense for Jake to be very close if not the absolute top of the all stars for C grade. We’re constantly being told how interesting this integration is because it’s given birth to so many powerhouses and how interested and involved the Gods are. It simply wouldn’t make sense if every integration had someone or even multiple people of the same level.

Anonymous

I was thinking as well that the buildup has been there for such a long time that we expect a neck-to-neck finish and Jake is probably going to beat him handily with a 20% advantage overall. Zogarth likes to subvert expectations, like Jake losing against the Sword Saint in their big duel.

JJB4345_80_815

So if Jake and Ell'hakan are expected to finish as the top 2 in the Leaderboards, what about the others that get over a 100% Challenge Dungeons multiplier? I'm copying/pasting the relevant sentence from chapter 851: The All-Stars... "While it was true getting a 100% multiplier was possible, it was simply so rare and often didn’t happen more than a dozen or so times in every era." Now, I'm just not getting how this all works together. Back in chapter 851 I ended up asking a stupid question about this same sentence. Only those competing on the Leaderboards get the multiplier (directly from Zogarth reply). I get it that an era is billions to trillions of years long, BUT it kinda sounds like once Jake and everyone CURRENTLY in Nevermore finishes up, they will instantly know where they rank on the Leaderboards. BUT how is that the case if there are going to be another 10 or more people getting over 100% multiplier over the course of an era? Ell'hakan only got a 95% multiplier. There should be more challengers to the Leaderboards, right? And someone may supplant BOTH of them a billion years or a trillion years from now, right?

Zogarth

Because it's a dozen in an era, and yes, it's entirely possible for someone to take the top spot from them at some point. In fact, there is a good chance it might happen.

donvitogonzalle

That would be funny :D Wasnt there a previous chapter where Mira, Irinixis, Reika, Bastilla and that Elf girl bonded over having a rough time because they knew Jake? I could totally see them grouping up for Nevermore just to escape people annoying them

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'deduct Jake would' deduct -> deduce 'why Unique Lifeform barely' Lifeform -> Lifeforms

Salamander-511

8.6/10. Lots of foundation building, not just power-ups/skills but for character relationships that will impact the story later down the line. I feel like if people were reading this as a whole book and not a chapter every weekday, there would be less griping.

Drew

even if it is available to everyone, transport tokens there and back don't equate to establishing logistical contact between their origin world and the wider multiverse

Christopher Hendrix

Meira wasn’t C-grade yet, correct? I’m not sure she was ready for Nevermore, but since it was 50 years in length, I guess she could have made it to Nevermore after Jake left… hmm.🤔

Scout Mills

I’m pretty sure Nevermore tokens only go to those with at least a little promise, also they are a part of the multiverse just not it’s wider social structure

Anonymous

I’d bet the source is another Minaga, as he regularly refers to his copies that way (usually regarding unpaid gambling debts)

Numbzy

I would assume it's because they don't have any blessed or any high performers. Without outside influences, they have no way to really connect with the larger multiverse. Remember when Chris was making the original teleporter to the Order, it was stated that the Order side had to take the burden of like 99% of the cost of teleporting. What happens if no one is willing to take that cost? They remain isolated. I would also assume that would change as people got into higher and higher grades though. One they would probably be invited into a larger mulitversal faction, but they would also be able to shoulder more of the burden of actually connecting with outside forces. The Nevermore token are some sort of agreement made with the system to help the new universe make it there if they aren't part of a larger faction.

Numbzy

Well think about it, Arnold's monstrous performance in the House of the Architect wouldn't balance out what probably happened in the Coliseum of Mortals. So naturally his score just won't be able to compete with the like of Jake, EH, or Azul.

Mathias

Yeah, this arc would be read in 1-2 weeks without having to wait for chapters probably.

jazz

Think of it like nba all time scoring leader board. It’s a fluid list that can change over time as more people are added

Alex Cox

I think the reason everybody has their eyes on the start of it is well... Yip ended up with #1 spot for the 92nd era and we know he wiped out a small pantheon for his universe or something(I can't remember). The start of the leaderboards are likely to show who will likely ascend to godhood from the era or will get close to it, definitely to highlight which are the true geniuses right from the get-go though.

Brennan

Is it that the first few years of prodegies going to Nevermore just the time that gets the most hype? It doesn't seem like there would be many times later in an era where so much competition happened at once

NoctisMi

I don't really get what you don't understand about the leaderboards but it's basically a score board that keeps updating until the end of the new era (probably) and until than every new C-Grade has a chance to participate for taking first place. I estimate the Top 10 will be always displayed and if you want to know the others you have to scroll down. So it's only natural that those with highest multipliers will be in the top 10 but I can imagine it gets harder the later in the era it is to find a really good party (depends on @Zogarth ) to carry you so far that you have enough points to multiply.

JJB4345_80_815

@ NoctisMi - My confusion was over a couple of things. 1) The confusion over if Ell'hakan was Jake's main challenger for the Leaderboards 2) When and how these other 100%+ multiplier people factored into the Leaderboards 3) Why there was so much excitement by the gods over the Leaderboards when a billion years from now in the 93rd era it could look completely different.

NoctisMi

I'm actually really curios right now about how strong of an impact the party as a hole has on how much progress you make on the later dungeon floors. So far it looks like Jake's party is just too damn powerful because, except the King, everyone has a Divine Blessjng or above. A Unique Lifeform rare enough to have in a group too and than everyone is working so good togethern and still balanced. I can't see El'Ass having a party as strong as Jake and thus not getting further down the dungeon than Jake and with a multiplier lower than Jake it's borderline impossible for him to get the 1st place. Except if he got more multipliers by doing exceptional feats in the normal floors bc of his bloodline but even that has a limit I guess. Light on that topic would be great :)

john henderson

I would say you'd do yourself a disservice skipping it on re-reads. I recently went back through and the portions that felt like they stretched on while waiting week to week really do read smoothly. I've found that Nevermore is actually quite a nice re-read for some of the slower parts. Typical structure of major story arcs in this genre tend to be choppy for the first 20%, then engrossing for the next 40%, followed by a less engaging 10% or so before they finish that last 30% strong. This makes it really hard to find a satisfying break point in about 70% of the arc. Nevermore on the other hand had break points spread every few chapters, while being mostly engaging (when read all at once) for the majority. I feel like people really let it bother them that "none of it is real," which I find to be truly strange as its not any less real than the rest of the story. It would be different if Jake was just full murder hobo because he wasn't treating any of it as real, but instead he is fully engaged. Combined with the periodic glimpses into the characterization of major players in the multiverse, there really is no difference in Jake doing all this in Nevermore vs. traveling to various worlds in the multiverse. In fact it feels more valid, as his reputation as chosen of the Malefic Viper doesn't interfere. To be honest, the Yip situation is a beautiful thing that satisfyingly explains how Jake can be drawn into the conflict. Outside of system events, and El'Hakan, there really wasn't any natural explanation for how Jake could have gotten pulled in to any conflicts in the multiverse after the big ceremony. I suppose you could argue that the robots have a reason to fight him as he can give birth to extinct bugs, but Jake fighting robots really isn't that satisfying as a hunter imo. Thanks to Nevermore, now he can engage in fights and trials related to several other primordials. He can also travel with Artemis as she guides him on a hunting journey. It's even possible for him to find more rivals in the top 10 contenders. Its also been the only window where Jake wasn't being actively influenced by external factors, so its helped establish his own independent feelings on the multiverse in general.

Daermon

As someone who started reading Primal Hunter a month or so ago I have much more interest in Nevermore and have enjoyed the arc (aside from on specific challenge dungeon). I do appreciate the defense of the arc at the end of this chapter also with a warning of "this isn't the last you will see of me". It also help answer some of the leveling questions at high level for me.

Anonymous

I hope we get more chapters like this one. Not to say that, Jake's party isn't interesting, but the Nevermore stuff is getting a bit repetitive. It's good to see how the rest of the new universe is doing in regards to Nevermore. It helps keep the world building feel alive and broad. I'd love to see more about how the ripples of Jake's passing effects Miranda and the others.

Osamaru Ta

I'm still expecting someone to come totally out of the blue and grab a top spot that no one ever expected. Like some total nobody that No one but the Wrymgod knew about, taking 3rd or 4th place.

john henderson

Guys, really think about this chapter. Its explained very plainly that the alternative leveling option to Jake entering Nevermore would have been him going from planet to planet just killing a bunch of mindless monsters. Another option would have been him going from planet to planet doing dungeons and dipping, which would just be Nevermore with extra steps. A direct timeskip through 80% of C-grade would have been so dissatisfying, but also no multiversal entity worth remembering is going to pick a fight with the Chosen of the Malefic Viper as a C-grade. Exactly because Nevermore isn't "real" it allows for this gap to be bridged in a narratively satisfying way. Despite the fact that it is a dungeon, Jake has repeatedly treated it as he would outside of a dungeon. Zog has consistently focused on the impact that Jake's actions have had in the actual multiverse, and given us more and more characterization of the peak beings. Basically what I'm saying is, if you're still in the comments complaining about wanting Nevermore to be over, shut the hell up and wait. You'll have something new to complain about week after week soon.

Hayden Leech

I can’t wait to stop seeing “nevermore” infront of chapters. It’ll be glorious

CaptainFlowers

I'm so so ready for the Meria and Artemis drama that's gonna hit Jake lmao. My man really do got a thing for elves. Caleb ain't gonna let him live it down 🤣 While I did have a problem with some of Nevermore's pacing, looking back, I've enjoyed far more of it than I didn't. Especially the Challenge Dungeons. Nevermore brought a lot of expansion to the world and lore, and a good time skip for side characters to level up. Looking forward to the next arc of the story!

KenTX325

Or private “training” with Artemis, letting Arnold play with spaceship, traveling with Sandy, returning to earth to prepare for war, dealing with chosen issues at order, fame from top score at Nevermore, visiting Vesperia. Lots of interesting options.

Austin Richins

Jake will return to the order, ready to kick back and have a couple beers with Villy, only to find an elven squatter in his home claiming to be his new mother-in-law. The nevermore arc was lengthy, but in all reality, it was fantastic. We just have skewed perceptions in the way that we're fed the story. Spending three weeks reading a single challenge dungeon makes it feel endless, when in reality it's what, a couple hours of reading? When we all inevitably revisit this arc, it's going to feel a lot shorter.

Anonymous

9/10 I enjoyed it tremendously and I'm looking forward to the uninterrupted reread as a book. 1000 Thanks to Zogarth for this fantastic arc (and lots of mental hugs - don't let the doom- and nay-sayers bother you). @John - very refind opinion - I like.

KenTX325

It’s hit and miss. The deamon lord fight, manga fight, the side stories, menga labyrinth, viewing party were all 8-9. The coliseum was 20 chapters too long and needs to be edited. A 5 as is but could be fixed. Challenge dungeons need to be edited to less than 20 chapters for the book. Editing another 20 % of Nevermore arc would improve the story. It was just too long. Need to get in a format in the book so it tells a full story. Not just a to be continued.

Tyler S.

While that would be interesting in a way it would also undermine the leading thread to Nevermore which is to bring more conflict between Jake and El'haky cheeto.

donvitogonzalle

Nevermore is cool, but the damn challenge dungeons were wayyyy too long, especially House of Archtiect and Endless Dungeon overstayed there welcome and the other 3 could have been shorter too. I honestly dont remember anything from Test of Character for example, and Colosseum nearly everything but the last foghts were meaningless too. Minaga was funny though.

Tyler S.

1) In regards to story yes, as i dont see Zog throwing in a Shamalama twist to some unknown character. 2) the rairity is such that only hundreds may appear over the course of the era and they will be looked at as having a high likelihood to reach Godhood and beyond 3) The excitement is due to the participants being highly blessed and chosen by Primordial's and other powerful Gods, all of this resulting in current political maneuvers. By the time the end of the era comes Jake will be his own god and watching Nevermore with the rest (maybe).

Tyler S.

Meira evolved to C-grade high elf and reacquired her home.

Tyler S.

I though he was talking about them sending over more eggs for him to possibly help royal up

donvitogonzalle

I think most people like Nevermore, its just that the Challenge Dungeons were so stretched that it took all the momentum from the story. Responding to valid criticism with "shut the fuck up" is stupid btw.

ShaunB

Nevermore has been awesome, team dynamics, crazy fights, evil cheeto confrontations, earth reunions. wacky dungeonmasters, arena battles, high lvl crafting, god talks, god fights, god romance, planetary intrigues, planetary destruction, and Jake taking his skills to new heights. Keep the hits coming Zog!! I hope we get some space battles or something that preps the team for that aspect of the multiverse.

Rahsheem Reid

Nevermore every grade sounds kind of boring tbh.

DBOMB YO

Well cause nobody cares about some max C level dude comes along at the end of the era to get over 100% because they're so far behind. All the most important people are now, starting as low level as possible to maximize the rewards. A level 400 getting like 2 points over a level 300 to get number 1 isnt exactly impressive lol

Kyle

I view Jake’s story as basically the rise of a new Primordial in the current era, so to me it’s only natural for Jake to score high on the all-star ladder. Maybe not first but top 10 for sure.

Kyle

I’d say 7/10, with the 7 on my scale being “pretty good” rather than “barely passing”. Might bump it to an 8/10 once I can reread it via the audiobook but week-to-week it just felt so long. There were definitely some peak 9-10/10 moments scattered throughout but it’s just hard to get invested in the fake dungeon worlds. Like the stuff with Jake’s disciple in House of the Architect would have been very compelling had it happened in the “real world”, but him being an NPC made it fall kinda flat for me, even if Jake learned a valuable lesson from it.

Bent Sommer

And whats with all new Born c Grades down the line? They will start new at 200 and maybe some monstrous genius will appear- maybe Jakes children

HailingMist

I want jake to help villy get his wife and child back and see the difference in villy after

Vega

Edit: - for them to (deduce that) Jake would have (been) offered some skill - Golden Road (Emporium) Great chapter, it’s fun to see the excitement from the various beings from Earth, wanting to see their leader’s name up on the leaderboards. I’m hoping that Jake will be up on the leaderboards by his title, as “The Hunter” or “The Primal Hunter”. Not gonna lie, his titles just sound awesome. Also, the gods POV parts are so satisfying. Thanks!

Matthew Avery

Interesting point with the recency bias. I didn't think of that as being the possibly huge factor that it could be. In terms of all-stars. It cannot be a list of the most powerful. It would have to be a list of the multiverses' top all-rounders. The general "how far" in floor lenght people will get makes some difference, but the challenge floors is where you get the multipliers that really make all the difference. If you are an unkillable beast in the arena, but can't wrap your head around test of character, and endless journey, you'd be screwed. I do agree that things about his bloodline, chosen status, team, powerset and situation sets him up for a great score. I am just questioning the claim that throughout all the eras, spanning longer than mortal minds can fathom, there wouldn't have been like 1000+ people getting +100% multipliers and decent scores to be multiplied. The time-scale is just ridiculously immense.

Bent Sommer

I am quite curious of how impactful these multipliers really are and how much floor difference there really will be!? So as example EH has 25% more multipliers than SS. How much floors das SS needs over EH to compensate that?

Anonymous

I would imagine that itll be much quicker for B and A grade. No challenge dungeons and no leaderboard connecting it to the wider conflict. I could imagine maybe 5-10 chapters at most for each, since those would essentially be mini arc leveling montages. I could see it being 2-5 specific floors that give him a lesson or he upgrades something or gets a skill. And then a few chapters more like todays.

Tom

There’s 2 leader boards one for people from the 93rd universe and one for the 93rd era as a whole. Yip of Yore was impressive because he was top of his universe and stayed at the top of the era once others started doing it

Yaldabaoth

(donvitogonzalle) It only feels that way, due to how scewed our view of reading this is. Being "drip fed," chapters once a day, 5 days a week, will absolutely scew ones perception of how long this Nevermore arc is, (especially how the challenge dungeons have been). So Yes, show a little patience muh dude/dudet, and enjoy the ride, without the whining & complaining, plz and thank you. (I.e., the polite way of saying, STFU, and let Zog cook.)

joey

It's also probably more difficult to find a strong party later, as the strongest people won't be at the same point in leveling later in the Era like that are at the beginning.

DirePants

Since you’ve created so many great well developed characters these kinds of chapters are really good. Not to say Jake isn’t. He’s the best. It’s just that Nevermore is getting kind of boring- repetitive is probably a more accurate description. While it’s great reading about his fights and growth, it sometimes feels as if many chapters go by with no real development. Or one development will take a many chapters while we read expositional thoughts. When coming from Jake’s POV it’s rehashed info or things he is speculating about. Sometimes it’s interesting. Now when we have gods doing the exposition or other characters, we get different views, expansion of lore, and hints at possible other stories you could write. Honestly as an IP you have a gold mine. If you were to write other novels based on this world, I could easily see you having a franchise one day. The selling point of Jake’s story is that it’s fun. Jake whole story and goal is simple to digest. The stakes are raised because he chooses to raise them- creating the best kind of story- a character driven story. Not a world driven story. Compare it to DotF which is soooo serious, with a lot of the same mechanics, and web novel pitfalls as PH, I think you have more appeal for a longer shelf life.

DirePants

That’s a story I’m supremely interested in. The hints Zogarth has dropped about it has be chomping at the bit. He really does a great job at developing intrigue as well as well thought out characters.

Mat

I was also curious of the same thing but in the opposite direction. EH was able to cheese and get ahead of Jake and party just before floor 70. So if he is able to maintain that same trajectory how much more floors will he need to cover the 10% lead Jake has on him from the challenge dungeons. Also how much of any impact will levels gained have on the points

DirePants

I think it would be unlikely that he doesn’t get a top spot. For a few reasons. The story of Jake itself seems to one of a new Apex Being. He’s not an underdog who has to constantly overcome his own weakness. His is a story of using hard work to compliment his natural talent and showing how it pays off. And as the Blightfather just said last chapter I think- luck is where preparation meets opportunity. I wouldn’t be surprised in the least if he has the highest or close to highest score ever recorded. Then we have El’Hakkan. He’s trying to write a story about how Jake is some evil demonlord, and using his power to influence weaker minds(sounds like modern day politics 😂). Jake winning the first spot and exceeding previous eras would throw a wrench in the story machine so to speak. It might even cause EH to to lose his composure and make a mistake or even doubt himself- devastating for someone with a path such as his. While Jake is just being Jake and focused on his path- his path of being the best- I’m sure he’s one, if not the only person to defeat Valdemar in the coliseum. So for Jake to not to something like break a record- arguably, Jake wouldn’t be following his path. He’s the definition of Based. Great topic of discussion dude 👊🏾

Mownmbasa

I have a small feeling that i hope it proves right that because of the overall progression of the levels in Jake's party.that they manage to rack up so many points that EH multiplier is meaningless and the entirety of Jake's party occupies top 5 slots and El Bitchan ends up 6th. I believe that will be poetic justice:)). Always delicious when i see the perspective and bickering of the gods. I never get tired of them fawning over Jake and i love how naive they are thinking Jake will ever give them the time of day instead of Villy. They forget an important aspect that because of their age and skewed perception of power dynamics they will never understand: Jake is friends with Villy. Unless some horrible betrayal from Villy happens, Jake will be his friend for life/eternity. And Villy knows this and feels the same. The signs are clear throughout the story. I am excited to explore in the future, Villi's history and family, his ascension to godhood, his epic fight and also the mystery of his family and if possible the resurrection of it. I promise i won't cry, it will be just the wind blowing dust in my eyes!

DirePants

Definitely waiting for it. I’m not rooting for a harem but I do expect them in Jake’s future simply because the created world has them and I’m looking forward to children of Jake and how the bloodline changes depending on the mate. Artemis and the Valhal girl (forgot her name) would make great mates. But then there’s also the newly evolved High Elf and chosen of Duskleaf, the demon who’s had her records changed because of Jake, and the wasp queen. This world has SO much possibility. But I do hope Jake and Artemis get together. The types of training she could offer him would(could🤔?) be a great benefit to his path.

DirePants

Tough call. I’d rather break it down and grade it on multiple factors- but I’m not in the mood to decide on those lol 6.9/10 I actually wrote a comment about the problem with this arc being so long with often times little actually developments or a development that would last multiple chapters. It’s common in web novels especially for newer authors to do this but since this story is established already and we do pay for it, I feel that’s something that has to stop. I’d rather he post less per week but give us more substantial chapters. On the arc as a whole I could score it lower but there are the moments that SOMEWHAT make up for the length of the arc like the battle with Valdemar or the gods viewing party. His amazing chapters with insights into other characters and lore of the created world. Also there’s the whole point of Nevermore: to show newly integrated universes things about the multiverse. It’s a great device to use in a story like this. I love how Jake didn’t go all edge lord but stayed true to himself and treated it as if it was real. Edit: A few people mentioned that it doesn’t seem as long on a reread and I have to be honest, I haven’t done one- Nevermore did start a while back and he did go a few breaks for personal reasons, which definitely made it feel longer. With that in mind I’ll bump my score to a solid 8/10- I’ll look forward to seeing if any changes are made in the novel. For instance- the endless maze was a part I mostly skimmed because from chapter to chapter Jake never really had any issues- he cheesed the whole thing and it would have better imo to write it that way and focus on the fights. Maybe have him actually find some of the fights challenging somehow? Difficult for him of course. He’s so OP and chill about it lol

Mat

Someone else toping Challenge Dungeons multiplier is possible (Villy once said Jake and EH are not the only monsters of the 93rd universe) but for the leaderboards one needs a top-tier party too. So I find it difficult for any unknown individual not associated with Multiverse big faction to be a monster and also gather a 5 member team of unknown monsters.

Ral

There it is! There was written mention of the "All Time Leaderboards" not just speculation.

ItWasIDIO!!

FINALLY!! It's almost over

DirePants

I could see that happening simply as a way to introduce a new character. But as Tyler said part of Nevermores function is to create conflict between Jake and El’Hakkan

DirePants

John Henderson thats not helpful in the least. Zog understand as a writer that he will be subjected to criticisms. We as paying customers have a right to express our opinions wether they positive or expressing dissatisfaction. If you don’t have an issue with the writer, your comment can just say what you like about it. But to get on here and act like a child is useless. Grow up and don’t speak to grown ups. If Zog didn’t want people’s comments he could disable to the option to leave them.

Hayden Leech

In third place we have the legendary third El’Hakan! Chosen of former nevermore champion Yip of Yore! In second place! The Primal hunter and chosen if the Malefic Viper! And our champion for the ninety third era is….!!!! Greg!

Matthew Avery

I love the angle of the story following an apex being. Although the degree of ease he achieves things have been shown to be varied. I'm not saying I think this will be like with the first meeting with the termite king, the ice dragon or even that B grade from minagas labyrinth. But looking back at those shows us that Zog is willing to put Jake behind and play a bit of an underdog tune. I think an interesting way to play it would be landing a 'low' 100 ranking the first here since the road to godhood is a notoriously slow burn, and then prooving his apex nature in the ease of which he stands above with consistancy. An even scarier existance than a top 5 contenter for the C rank, All-star board, is a person which can keep doing it. The fact that Jake defeated Valdemar wasn't what gave me goosebumps, it was the fact that he A; was standing without "damage" at the end. And B; could repeat the feat semi-regularly. I agree with the sentiment that it wouldn't at all surprise if his score absoloutly slaps by the end. I am just unsure what angle the final tally will take, and what message Zog will convey with it. Thanks, man. I thought it was an interesting topic. Fun to read all the responses.

Osamaru Ta

From a story perspective, true. But not from a in-universe perspective. In universe, Nevermore, the universe and even the system, don't really CARE about Jake or what he is or isn't doing. The idea that someone couldn't have "slipped under the radar" isn't to hard to imagine.

Rahsheem Reid

I can agree with most of this lvling and upgrading skills is usually highlighted with a lot of depth so I’m thinking 20-50 chaps for the Nevermore especially now that the gods have all eyes on Jake when he does anything they have the ability to view. For me it’s that the plot is not developing but I see the vision of the Artist and I love the story regardless of the fact and I am probably wrong but I just don’t see it yet so I’ll wait and hopefully be proven wrong which for me makes a better feeling when reading. Thank you for your insight.

Jelani Willock

It'll be really funny if Jake wins from that extra minaga point from like floor 30

Numbzy

Yes and no. I definitely would find that to be a funny way of ending it, but I would also find it slightly disappointing. We almost expect Jake to go above and beyond his competition, so a close ending like that would feel almost like EH doesn't really deserve it. Honestly I'm still confused how EH did so well in the House of the Architect. After the talk about putting in checks and balances for Bloodline/transcendences him getting such a high score, with presumably his bloodline as a major contributor to his victories feels kind of hallow.

Numbzy

I see it much the same way. Honestly I've never read such a strong intro as dfot. The first 5 books are in my opinion peak character building. But personally the story fell off after that. PH becomes the clear better story after that, and imo, it's not even close. The stories have an overall different tone to the whole story. I find PH to be a much more enjoyable story to read. And that's why I read these story's, to enjoy them.

Seiryus

I doubt that we'll ever get anything beyond a passing mention in the next grades.

Seiryus

No, I'm pretty sure I'm gonna hate the early parts of the Colosseum in book form as well. HoA and NEJ could also have had fewer chapters each. But the main thing for me is that we rarely see Jake in a party and I feel like those interactions could have been better explored. Still liked it overall though.

Lewke

“(Miranda) had ended up going with some individuals from the Order of the Malefic Viper to get a good party going…” Miranda found the super secret Nevermore drinking achievement and title that Jake missed with all his silly hunting and going for the leaderboards!

Numbzy

It does feel much shorter. I recently reread the entire story and Nevermore feels much more busy than daily chapters that way.

Anonymous

Yes. ~But~ it was also mentioned that it is unusual for someone from new universes to not break the all time record, so I don't know if it will be as impactful as people might expect.

Blem

I couldn’t have said it better myself.

Aerlevsedi

Gonna be honest I read that and didn't even think of the cheeto. I was more thinking about Jake's performance compared to the best of previous eras.

Peter Smith

Most people seem to forget that EH is a genius. His BS bloodline is so oberpoweringly annoying that we seem to forget that he is a genius born from effort and knowledge. I would assume that he would attempt to use his bloodline on nevermire just to test it, but then he would put in his effort, intelligence, and knowledge into creating.

Peter Smith

Jake is simple. Thats not to say hes stupid, just that he sees his path and the ways to get to it. Everything else ultimately doesn't matter. While EH is a master politician and storyteller. When i say master though, i mean a true master. True masters of storytelling build alternate personalities just to seek understanding, they seek knowledge like drowning rats, just to make the story more believable. True master politicians are the ines who walk among those they profess to represent, they learn what it is to be those people, they emulate them, become them, and then they use that knowledge to further their goals by helping those same people. Jake is none of those, he has a little talent and a lot of intuition, EH has knowledge, experience, and a bloodline that holds it all together. The only thing preventing EH from becoming a truly powerful being at this time is making the mistake of treating Jake, the natural Predator of existence itself, as prey.

DirePants

No you’re exactly right! An amazing intro and the first few books were absolutely brilliant. Then it just fell off. The author started taking more breaks, the chapters got full of pointless inner monologues. Whole chapters where nothing significant would happen just Zac’s thoughts. Then the descriptions of things he talked about got more vague and esoteric. He’s trying to make it more into one of those Chinese style Xianxia novels with LitRPG elements, but he’s almost completely removed the LitRPG parts. The elements of Xianxia were always there but now it’s the primary focus. His arcs got exceedingly long as well but add that to inner monologues and all the vagueness of the esoteric magical stuff and it just got boring. PH is always interesting even when I have complaints, they’re not enough to make me stop reading it. Especially because Jake always delivers.

Chloe

Love seeing Artimis again. Hoping for a good adventure for those 2 soon. And yea. Be good if Jake's team took spots 1-5 and EH and his orange self came in 7th behind some random.

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Micah Molina

I understand what this perspective of, when it's released the Challenge Dungeons will be much faster and more enjoyable. This is true to a certain extent. Now well into the series, if I had to pick a part that's the biggest slog to get through, it would be the Tutorial books one and two. Specifically, the 4 Challenge Dungeons in the tutorial, prior to the King of the Forest. Having read/listened to the series, those 4 dungeons are bland. Would I say Nevermores are just as bad? No but it's close for me. What makes these better is we have more pov's and the Gods interactions hype it up. I love Nevermore's group and god content. Was not a fan of the solo stuff outside of the banter with Minaga.

Hunter Thornton

I realllllllly hope Jake wins top spot so he can rub Ell’Hake a Nut and that prick Yips faces in it. Also Jake should give Miranda more holidays. Its almost like he’s runnin one of those black companies u read bout in manga all the time

Dream

I don't think Jake cares how Miranda handles her work, she can probably take time off whenever she wants as long as the settlement is handled. He's a hands off type of boss who doesn't really care about the how and why of the company, just the benefits he might get from it that would make him stronger.

Blaq Jesus

I honestly don't care much for Jake's bed tussling throughout this entire story with much of anyone. However, I would make an exception for Miranda. We had some build up that was leading up to "something" happening, but with how things are written, that seems to have been backtracked on which is unfortunate and seems like a waste of what was previously written. Artemis is OK though too tbh.