Double Trouble Milestone (Patreon)

Today I finished the complete composition with visual FX's. There is post coming with VR WIP version to download. 

Here I would like to write about what has been done and to hear from you about it. 

As a reminder. The story goes as this. The viewer is has been transformed to sentient fleshlight. Now he or she is in big (double) trouble, as two succubuses with giant cocks are going to have some fun 😏. Because the viewer is a small the demons appear gigantic - they are around 100x the size.

Current edit presents everything from POV perspective after the transformation. I'm planning to add short semi static introduction at the beginning with intermediate scenes like this one:

But in this case, the fleshlight is going to be fixed to the wall.

Animation begins with young futa approaching the viewer. She waves her cock (measuring about haf a meter in length and 20cm in diameter), producing visible scent that condenses on the viewer's face, slowly dripping down.

The steam is full 3D fluid simulation, it has a volume that should be visible in VR. However I reduced the intensity to not lose the clarity.

After 3 rounds of pounding, young succubus ejaculates. Her cum is quite runny and transparent, but there is a lot coming out, with high pressure. To show that the sticky substance is fresh and hot it fumes with steam that condenses on the viewer's face. Added some ghosting and aberration effects to show the enormous overload of the viewer's capacity. 

Later comes the mature futa. Similarly to the previous one, she waves her giant cock (measuring about a meter in length and 30cm in diameter) in front of the viewer, producing visible aroma that condenses on the viewer's face, slowly dripping down. However this time the smell is much more visible.

To show the enormous overload when she enters for the first time there are heavy ghosting and aberration effects.

Finally, when she unlashes her full cum reservoir, there is a heavy slow motion with ghosting and aberration effects. To show that her semen is much thicker it does not come out of the viewer immediately, it's much more opaque and has clumps.

Let me know what do you think. Are the effects and the story alright? Something needs to be changed?