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Hello you amazing people! Another chapter done and went a little overboard at 4.5k, but I hope you all like it! I'll get more done in a few days and hopefully keep up this pace for you easy enough!


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TybKEC4IHyL5CfOEKLe1pWJE34xnWX8LzP2rZamr5Ss/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Anonymous

"Pull a Delta." I keked, so hard.

BrokenThyme

...and the happy little tune that'd been going on and on in the back of everyone's head for ages, just below the level of conscious awareness, just went silent.

Allora Lee

Delta will 1000% be devastated and tell ruli “send them all in I will purge them so they can rest”

Raufgar

I agree. Although my brain read it as 'leaked' at first, which I *also* agree.

Raufgar

Thanks Stew for the story and the chapter~! I binge-read my way from YouTube to Royal Road to your Patreon. Neglected other stories. Binged so hard over the week... Anyways, I can see Delta setting the fragments 'free', and giving them the 'A New Nu' treatment, then putting them to work either as intermediaries for the other 'young' dungeons, or as Sis's and Bro's little helpers (every creator god needs their angels, who else to do the work?!?)... I'd like to see Fairplay's reaction to just that!

Anonymous

Thank you for the chapter, but if you take too long to write the next one after that cliffhanger we will riot :P

Carl Mason

Fairplay is intent on making Delta out to be a murderhobo dungeon. Be careful what you wish for...

Carl Mason

Not that I disagree on principle, but what would rioting accomplish? Or do you mean digital rioting in the comments here? Probably just delays the next chapter to have to deal with all the comments.

Daniel Gesualdi

Digital rioting via sending rediculous memes! Though Patreon doesn't support gifs.... SpongeBob pitchfork and torch salesman: https://c.tenor.com/VmAHcDbAnRAAAAAM/angry-mob.gif This way there is inspiration for jokes! 🥳

Nef Mccrimmon

Awww snap u broke delts heart lets go cant wait to see max lvl raid delta

PickledTink

It is spelled "Ridiculous". "Rid" as in getting rid of the stupid misspelling, not "Red" as in the colour of the rotten tomatoes I am throwing at you for it.

Kiera

My heart hurts for Delta and I'm anxious to see how Nu reacts when he sees how broken up she is about everything. Considering the dungeon has a dragon now, I think it's gonna be pretty interesting.

Raufgar

I just had a thought, if they can put core shards into a walking body that survives outside of a dungeon...can Delta circumvent the programming and have a "mobile remote communications platform" aka outside avatar body?

phantom

Why would Delta want to move her core outside her body? As far as interacting with things outside her body she was able to hack into Fairplay's portal with little effort.

Jeanean

And she used that power to give them wedgies XD (Thanks for reminding me of that)

Jeanean

Well, it seems that things are about to get exciting! Also, stoked to see when Beta finaly meets Delta, poor girl has been deprived of at least nine years worth of memories.

Raufgar

Not move her core outside her body, it is stated the bodies were remotely controlled from the outside while using the core shards as power sources. Given the proclivity of Delta's Mana to circumvent and 'infest' inanimate things and lifeforms, the idea is Delta can use the bodies as mobile terminals to interact and affect the outside of her Dungeon self, essentially like another form of avatar that is not limited to her insides. You know how she is still somewhat lonely and pining for human contact. It can also serve as a mobile mana infestation node or 'pylon' as she likes to say, as a way of spreading herself without expanding her borders.

phantom

I think Gamma needs it more. My word the abuse he had been through. Sadly though if he went to Delta she would be swarmed.

Carcavac

I love how gamma suddenly became Voldemort for a different reason