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97: Bubbling to the Surface

The door lead to a laboratory. The open hall with many tiny connected hallways was a surprising space compared to the Silence pit but Delta used Doctor's eyes to peer into the space. It was more like a dungeon in the realest sense. A place where people were suffered and the sun never touched.

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Anonymous

Can't read on phone, keeps sending me to google support. Anyone else getting this?

Knolden

seems you need an app for it on the phones and pads: https://itunes.apple.com/dk/app/google-docs/id842842640?l=da&mt=8

Alan McBrayer

I really hate the retcon that all of the dungeons are calling the system “Sister”. It was such a big deal when delta called her family that the system was screaming at Nu. And now all of the sudden every dungeon on the planet is referring to her as a Sister which kills ALL of the wonder and meaning out of that moment

Alan McBrayer

Every time I read a dungeon calling system Sister without mentioning that it is a new title I like the story a little less

SadGuy

I think it's less a retcon, as it's a show of the other Dungeons evolving via Delta's influence.

SadGuy

The Dungeon in the Kingdom recently took up sculpting as a hobby, which he mentioned was a byproduct of the System's prompting. Everyone calling the System "Sis" could just be "Sis's" preference bleeding over into their speech paterns.

Anonymous

Anyone else worried that we've asked too much of Stewie? Seems asking for three a week is causing them to write less.

Anonymous

Thank you! Are all of the dungeons becoming artistic?

Stewart92

Oh no. Its less to di with burnout and such. When i post ill explain ^^

Anonymous

thanks for the chapter!