CH6 TFTM Page 12 - Step By Step (Patreon)
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Here's progress of page 12. It's definitely a panel heavy page, showing my fervour to animation. I just have to jam in frames- I mean panels that do nothing but show a certain emotion.
For example, the original draft of this page didn't have panel third, and it went straight to Clem asking her question. That felt rushed and I wanted to show a moment of Clem hesitation before asking the question. She likes Whinter, but she had to do this conversation.
Bonus is that the panel 2 and 3 work well with the last two panels, being similar but shows the emotion shift between the two scenes.