New Amissio - 01 (working title) (Patreon)

Aaaalright!
This will be the new fresh start of my long-forsaken original comic project of Amissio that I started years (!) ago and then ended up on a indefinite hiatus, mostly because I wasn't happy with a lot of things...
This was promised when I reached my milestone here on patreon, so I'm finally glad to start delivering that (whew)..

For this, I'm going to start again working on it from a different perspective and in a different way of storytelling rather than the classic manga style I was using before (if you don't know my older comic I'll leave a link in the description), using this format hopefully. It's rather simple to use as a base, and I already got myself a "rhythm" thanks to The Crawling City.

What do you think? does this style of page look right? Or should I reverse to a more classic manga-type page? (though that's a lot more work IMO)
I'll be most likely re-telling the first part of Amissio in this style too, but as a shortened version anyway : )

Anyway, thanks again for this, since it's Patreon suppor that's allowing me to do this right now, so thanks a lot for that guys.