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I just received a Royal Road review, the first one in over a month. It was brutally honest. I feel like I have written myself in a corner and cannot fix what the reviewer had problems with.
My plan is/was to have a pretty massive time jump to get her old enough to follow the army around. To do that, all her magical training would need to come to a halt. The biggest problem with following the military is that it locks her there as a “necessary resource.”
I like/want constructive criticism, and at this point, I’m wondering if I shouldn't start over with a new story. I feel like I have become a better writer (at least from when I started), and I can avoid many issues I’ve created for myself. Don't get me wrong, I’m not dead set on abandoning Violet. It is just tricky when my beginning chapters cripple me. Changing the magic system isn’t reasonable at this point.
I have not thoroughly thought out my next story, but it will still be an isekai. The route I’ll take, though, is having the MC take over someone’s body that had just died. Many of the elements of Violet’s world will be similar but not quite the same. I’ll rework the skill/magic system, and I’m not going to fiddle around with health bars or stats that don't matter.