Typos (Patreon)

I wanted to drop a quick line and invite people to post areas with typos. I've found a few when I've started to go back through testing the early dialogue and I'm sure I've still missed a few--maybe even several. I'm sure more people will suggest changes once I post the free version, but I would like to have all the typos from v01 and v02 corrected in v03 if I can. Let me know if anyone sees things. Feel free to be picky. There is a shit-ton of slang in this so those parts are purposeful but if you have something you want me to review, please let me know. Thanks in advance. 

-Ryn