Blue Born (work in progress) - Pages 1-11 (Patreon)

Here's where I'm currently at with the comic. There are several texts that need improvement still and other things xD
I feel unsure if I can get the points across, that I want to tell with those few pages.  I imagine Erik to be this young sly rogue, but I think he still seems mostly nice?...  We'll see if it all holds up, once all pages are set :')

Download here:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4euqxjwweu7va0x/blue_born_wip_p1-11.rar?dl=0