Preview draft & call for feedback: The Future is a Dead Mall (Patreon)

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Hey all, things are slowly wrapping up on this next video, to the point that there's a mostly-watchable draft.

I know a lot of you like to wait for the finished video, and I respect that, but for those who do want to see an unfinished 90% done preview, here it is.

There's still some pretty significant work being done on this, several minutes that might hit the cutting room floor. To that end I'm looking for some fairly intense feedback. Like, I would actually say with this one don't worry about how "obviously" incomplete something is, don't assume I "already know about that problem" (even if I do). For example, I know the audio mix is an absolute mess, because I've barely touched it, only adjusted things that were egregiously bad, but if you run into audio problems, go ahead and mention them. If there's audio missing because a voice clip isn't in place yet (probably because I'm waiting for an external VO), mention it anyway. There's enough in here that I do need feedback or a second, third, fifteenth set of eyes on that I would rather be told about problems I already know about rather than miss problems because people assumed I "wouldn't miss something so obvious."

Thanks, all, for your patience.