Punching… (Patreon)

Darn… I woke up this morning and really want to have Reggie punch Ethel. Not because I want to see Ethel hit up but it amplifies what a jerk Reggie is and makes the reader really feel sorry for poor Ethel.

Okay. Apologies in advance if you feel it goes too far but it has a great payoff in the Betty/Ethel scene.

After I’m done, if people want me to change it, I can always just have Reggie twisting her arm which works with the story as well, but not as shocking.