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I might have started this one even more clueless than usual as I wasn't really paying too much attention to the personality and dialogue during my playthrough of Fontaine as much as I should have. Well not only that, Lynette really wasn't much of a talker so there wasn't as much I could learn from her through the cutscenes I encountered so far. Maybe she has more as the story progress but I've been a bit too busy to try and do as much research as I would normally. 


Oh for those of you who don't play Genshin, you might be a bit confused without the context so I'll just provide the basics for this one because I usually write dialogues in the perspective of the character I'm drawing.

This one, most of the dialogue is coming from her twin brother who happens to be a Magician. Lynette is his lovely assistant often the escape artist between the two and out of the two Lyney (her brother) is the one who does most of the talking. 


The rest? Well, I think the art tells plenty more of the story than what I can explain so sit back and enjoy! 


I'll be honest though, I feel the last page was a bit rushed for my personal taste. I wanted to add a ending comment from Lyney but couldn't really figure out what I would have him say. I may or may not come back to this last page and add a director's cut version to add some additional dialogue if a good idea comes up. 

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CrimsonPhilemon

Love the usage of the lyney annoucer voice bubbles for this dialogue and of course the art, delivers on all fronts. Maybe I would suggest like something for the hypnotizing scene where lynette will play up the lewd catgirl personality more as hypnotizing her would allow her to act more out of character while having some resistance.

CrimsonPhilemon

From there we can have lyney annouce the submissive lewd catgirl personality shift.

Anonymous

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