Question. (Patreon)

Is this page even good? I drew 3 versions of it. Never even did two for any other page. I wanted disney cartoon exaggeration  to try get Judy’s jolt. But Felt it was too much. Hence saying it might change. I also have 5 layer versions of her face. Something I’m trying to learn is acting for comics. I toned back her jolt slightly. I saw people shrink the eyes a lot in their comics. But looks weird. I made a new version. Larger eyes and small adjusted details.

Also this page just feels a little….empty I guess?

I’m likely going to post with the new face. And if I ever do a comic again try to learn performance there.

Dm me if you don’t wanna critique publicly ha I don’t mind either way. My Twitter journey is to help me learn :)