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Never Insult a Repecki 6 (p. 63-64) (Patreon)

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2023-09-22 14:59:01
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2023-10

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Hellofacritic

Okay, I just thought about it a bit more and here is my slight criticism with anal being the captain's first experience with Ummul. First, I think it’s a bit brutal. While I’m not opposed to an anal focused conversion it could be more interesting if we got more context, maybe? Ummul is much bigger than a normal human, and most untrained women experience some pain during anal for anything too big (it needs training for it). Maybe it would fit better if the Captain was already shown as having an anal obsession (which would explain both why she requests it and why she handles it well) or maybe have us understanding why Ummul (so far satisfied with pussies and mostly careful and considerate) suddenly goes for the potentially painful hole. Maybe he has a some kind of resentment or beef to settle? Second, how do we know it will help get rid of the captain’s chemically inflicted reaction? The invitation is supposed to be a preliminary for mating. I don’t see how anal leads in any way to efficient reproduction… Maybe Amelia could explain how (the chemicals in the semen passing through the intestinal membrane, etc). Otherwise, still one of my favorite stories. Can't wait to see more. With some impregnation down the line, hopefully.

pegasusart
>>118203100

Always appreciate your thoughtful feedback. A couple points/arguments for why I did pick anal for this chapter: Ummul mentions specifically that the Invitation causes a reaction in the woman that makes her "ready" for him. We can take that to mean it somehow causes gaping/elasticity of tissue in both the pussy and ass, meaning the pain Captain Kennedy feels is minimal. In Rawly's original story, there's way more focus on anal sex, as Ummul avoids finishing in his women's pussies to avoid the risk of pregnancy, instead repeatedly cumming in their asses. I chose to forego this detail, which is why there's no explicitly anal sex until this chapter. Though we know Ummul doesn't harbor a specific grudge or enmity against the Captain, there is something I think symbolic about fucking your superior commander in the ass that is extra degrading and satisfying. And finally, this allowed me to do an anal sex scene, which as I mentioned, I had avoided for the prior five chapters. Variety is the spice of life, as they say. Readers ask for anal quite often, and I wanted this story to have a little for everyone.

Anonymous

Anal + hot woman = sexual domination= erotic