Pele's Got Nothing on Me: Rough 1 (Patreon)

Ok lets get this lava party started, even more fitting with the new ongoing eruption in Iceland. If you haven't checked it out, please do its insanely cool.

Annabelles first solo comic! A girl who grows bigger with heat hiking on a lava flow in Hawaii? What could go wrong!?

As always here is the information sent to the artist: 

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Panel 1 Wide shot, we see a jeep parked near the edge of an old lava flow. Its a transition from jungle to rocky moonscape. (see reference). The Jeep “Lava Tours” on the side of it or on the back. Theres a sign in the foreground “Danger, Active Lava Flows”  Walking past the jeep out to the lava flows in a skinny white dog(for reference the goddess Pele could take the form of a dog, an old woman, or a beautiful lady).

There's a speech bubble coming from the Jeeps radio

-static- Tour group 42 come in! Be advised there’s signs of an eruption. Please return to base. -static hiss- Come in tour group 42! -static-

Panel 2 Wide shot, out on the lava fields(the backgrounds can be sketchier than normal since it’s rather detailed, just have fun with it). Annabelle and her tour guide are walking. They are each in hiking boots, jeans, and short sleeve shirts. They wear brimmed hats, one has a backpack on, and they could have sunglasses on as well. It’s a harsh environment.

The tour guide is meant to be a bigger, stronger looking character(see references). Hes taller compared to Annabelle who's short and hourglass shaped.

Annabelle “Hey Kamea,thanks for taking me on a solo tour of the flow”

Kemea (Excited) “Anytime. Not every day my date wants to hike to the lava with me!”

Panel 3 Medium shot. We see the two hiking in the distance, the white dog is watching them. She’s following them.

Panel 4 Medium shot. Annabelle is stopping to adjust her top, it was fitting earlier; now it's starting to get a bit tighter. Kemea is watching as he takes a drink of water, he's intrigued.

Annabelle “Yeah the heat just has such a wonderful effect on my body. I’ll show you want I

mean when we get a bit closer to the lava. I think you’ll enjoy the show.”

Panel 5 Annabelle and Kemea embrace and kiss.

Panel 6 smaller panel, Close up, we see the dog glaring at the two lovers.