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WIP Dragon Lessons III, Pages 22, 23 and 24 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-06-21 21:20:18
Imported:
2021-06

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English is not my first language, please correct me if I made any mistake in the dialogues or if you think another dialogue would fit better.

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Star Corrsin

Everything looks fine imo and great comic btw

Anonymous

"I have to think of something else; my jaw hurts" Changing that "on" to an "of". Add a semicolon to avoid the comma splice. A period helps, too. "I have to think of something else; my jaw hurts" OR "I have to think of something else. My jaw hurts!" -- Here are some more casual variants: "Gotta think of something else; my jaw's killing me!" "Gotta try something new; my jaw hurts"

Anonymous

I feel like I've missed something in these pages that or I can't think right about it 🤣 other then that it's going very well ☺️