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Heya. New chapter. Here same as last time the gdoc links:

view only: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vC4BAv-NLqLfPpaAME2Vs_0Rkv6CnXwPIG-YHBEtDF8/edit?usp=sharing

beta: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rfe2ST62_11k3gVVQaIFfZ2eJQ8PHQYCpl_v1wYNKME/edit?usp=sharing


Thank you for reading :)

Comments

NoReTr3aT

I love it. Great chappy. I really like that they are not alone. More interaction with others is great and the world feels more alive. I really liked azarinth healer, but sometimes the alone and fighting chappys were bit dull. Always was the most enjoyable with others. Better stakes, more perspectives, more possible outcomes. Moster + Ilea = dead monster, but monster + kate & logan + others = ? way more options for the story and more enjoyable to read. I wonder how long until we get a human antagonist. I hope the Union & Exterminator combo holds, kinda like the shadows and the city they are based in (forgot the name).

Anonymous

I hope there is no human antagonists for some time and when they do show up they are not generic 'raiders'. Something a little more realistic like maybe the Union and another large group fighting over some sort of rare resource they cant share. There is a lot of grey in that area to narratively explore vs the black & white morality of generic 'raiders'.

Gardor

Wonder if Logan can give his speech buff thing through a radio, does that skill need mana?